If eye Fall
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A fictional trite romantic poem of a guy predicting a fall, but in the direction of someone he truly adores,
her beauty has him mesmerized, so his fall should be pasteurized, at least homogenized.
If I fall,
let it be in love with you.
When the walls come
please smile my frown.
Enlightened my day,
lets go on out and play.
Dance to the music,
sip red wine,
enjoy our dine,
before I go any futher,
you're so fine,
it's alright if you're not mine.
because you still make my day.
Excuse me for slipping,
your beauty has me tripping.
I don't mind the trip,
but I'd love to avoid the slip.
I want to be standing straight,
if falling in love with you is my fate.
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|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so clever!! and so very sweet|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|My dearest friend, this is one of your very best...ever consider writing more romantic stuff? You're good... thanks for being you! Non judgmentle, loving, kind, compassionate...not to mention you make being here at the Den a wonderful place to be. Love ya always, Holly|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,you are too sweet...yup tears rollin down my face also...oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyy..how am I ever going to get my work done sweet sweet man reading your so tender,loving,beautiful words..huh....never change..I love you just the way you are...oh myyyyyyyyyyy...Hugsssss
Chanti Lace xoxo
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|This is very romantic, very sweet and sensual, makes me want to cry and smile at thesame time.
"...it's alright if you're not mine.
because you still make my day."
To love for the sake of loving is angelic, to love for the sake of being loved is human. Love like this is pure.
I am saving this one.