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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello |
4/25/2009 |
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Any lady who reads this will probably say yes! To describe it as romantic is to be speechless and inadequate, so I'll call this poem perfectly captivating!
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/6/2008 |
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| Georg I've never read a more beautiful and soulful poem, deeply touching. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/4/2008 |
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This poem is AMAZING ARTFUL ABUNDANT ALIMENT for the mind...
"Love is......a mirage" enchants and inspires.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
5/4/2008 |
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This goes deep into the inner feelings of the soul. Thanks
George, your pen shines across the den. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/2/2008 |
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Georg, your writing can make me swoon;-)This is beyond beautiful with the deepest depths of passion. Thank you for sharing!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
5/2/2008 |
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Now look what you wen't and did ... got that moth all burnt up. Poor moth! Kidding aside, this is an excellent love poem, Georg! Write on!
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/2/2008 |
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George, This Is By Far My Favorite Poem I Have Ever Read Of Yours. I Love The Intensity of Desires & Yearnings & Thye Loving Passions Are So Beautiful To Me. Your A Master Poet Of Love
Sighhhhhhh.......I Love Your Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/2/2008 |
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Very moving and reaches into the core of life itself to ignite the fire of passion of romance in such an elogant manner.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/2/2008 |
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| Haunting...twilight regrets really hit me in the core. You sing beautifully of romance, a desire to pleasure someone. I was touched, in my heart. I know I'm touched in the head. Excellent write. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/2/2008 |
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Georg,
I feel a response is needed to the poem,
A duet of song
breaths fire into your soul,
A moment when you realize
that life has taken a toll.
Now begin anew,
go to her without regrets,
and find that dormant love
that lingers in the darkest depths.
No longer do you need to be alone,
living in a lifeless abyss,
knowing that your love will bloom
with this lovely little miss.
No one says you are not allowed,
to become the lover that you dream,
just open up your heart
and go to your midsummer night's queen.
This is for you Georg, I am going to post this on my site !
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
5/2/2008 |
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| Your lines flow with the spirit of a romantic knight. Wonderful! |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
5/2/2008 |
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| Intriguing Georg, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/2/2008 |
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this is stunning,, the fire is still burning.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/2/2008 |
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| You stunned me with this one. Like the way the words just flow and the message it tells. Great one ********** ********** |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/2/2008 |
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You just need to find someone who isn't an ogress... hee,hee, hee...
Beautifully written, my friend!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/2/2008 |
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A journey towards love is always worth the trip, even if we have to come across the occasional mirage...this is splendid writing, dear man.
peace and love, Carole~
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/2/2008 |
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Stay upright and keep on walking, Georg; that illusion may be a reality and it's worth the journey. You've composed a beautiful love sonata
~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
5/2/2008 |
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| Beautiful, keep walking my friend, she will not be able to refuse yoo. She is there, just keep moving forward. Love your write, Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/2/2008 |
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| Wao! You are wise...love is...a mirage...and just incase. Yes, you've said it in four words, love is a risk worth taking, you never know |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/2/2008 |
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A heartfelt write, George! Well-done!!!
Sandie May :o) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/2/2008 |
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| Keep walking toward that mirage, brother - just in case. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/2/2008 |
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Sad write, Georg; but effectively penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/2/2008 |
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| How sad and melancholy as we walk through life with no strings attached. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/2/2008 |
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Through life we have often followed images, illusions and false feelings that led us to an empty end with nothing but hurt at the end, nothing to look forward to and often we felt it was the end for us. A great write that I can read so much into Georg, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/2/2008 |
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| Oh my,how sweet your words are dear man..have a wonderful and safe day sweet man..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/2/2008 |
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Such sweet yearning and vivid images make this write a keeper. It is also true that a mirage can be a cruel thing but...they have also been know to keep a man going until help arrived. So who knows Georg each foot crawled is a foot closer to somthing.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/2/2008 |
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| BEAUTIFUL, GOLDEN WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish YOU are talking about me.......... Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/2/2008 |
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| Poignant writing. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/2/2008 |
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Good morning, Georg,
Oh, this is a powerfully poignant read to read this early in the A.M. - very well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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