|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very interesting haiku, but what's a heart to do, I'm sure a part of your heart is in your book, in this den, in this world, in this life,
in this in. The heart has a tremendous capacity, people just do not know how to master it, not saying I do. Everyone one always speaks of, love, falls in love, and whatever, but no one really knows what love is, until they follow God's example, then their eyes truly open to real life. If you're a poet, God will get in your verse, if you are a writer he'll inspire your words, if you are faithful your creativity will never end. If you tell him you do not want to be the perfect puppet and you want to enjoy the freedom he bestowed, he'll understand your honesty and still walk with you. Sound like a preacher don't I, so B it. Your haiku got me going because my whole life had to be rewrote at a certain point. I realized I was brainwashed from family, friends, and others. Honor thy father and mother, a father who never did bother, I honored him but it was my choice not the brainwashed one. The teasing the name calling, everything to destroy a young mans confidence, so I wiped my brain clean as I could around age 40 and rewrote the book. Built my broken down confidence up to never be pierced again by naysayers, jealous fools and other stupid haters, I'm finished with this but not with you, word up, hugs
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|The book that is beautifully written enough to re-read over again is the heart of why we writers do what we do. Literature, such as this, stands the test of time and has everlasting staying power.
Well written, Bernice.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|There are those moments when it would be wonderful to turn back time...if only for a moment. Beautiful haiku, Bernice.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|To reread a book...is to double ones pleasure.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|unique and thoughful haiku, Bernice!
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|I really like your Haiku style. I'm really starting to look forward to it each day. This poem demonstrates an angle of your thinking pattern that seems to be very different and unique from others.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
I Love This
your good at these, I have a couple at authearth I should fetch them from their Haiku Group
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ah Bernice, this ku has thoughts rich in desires, a desire to turn back time, a desire to better understand what happened, and a desire to find again the path to happiness.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Bernice I believe we have done this too, In my book people will find my heart. You say much with so few words, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Another wonderful haiku, Bernice ... You are great at it ...|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Much said within this Haiku.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|deep and rich...
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette