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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/7/2008 |
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| Self deception is complete when we no longer seek the truth of who we are. Great piece of work, E T. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/4/2008 |
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Eileen,
"To thine own self be true" could apply here - but we can't do it alone, without Creator's help - excellent write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
5/4/2008 |
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So painfully honest...but the truth shall set you free.
Fear is so powerful and blinding it truly is an act of faith to take that inner journey.
Thank you for this wonderfully written, thought provoking examination of our inner selves!! |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/4/2008 |
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| this poem is a gem~ |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
5/4/2008 |
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| A real jewel. GBQ |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
5/3/2008 |
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| Eileen, this is full of truths and honesty...sowers of seeds do reap rewards in Heaven and we have to allow God to guide us in our walk in this life to achieve our journey in the right manner, and to forgive, feel compassion, listen, reach out to others, and allow God to use us in our society in whatever way He deems fit. Your words caused this reader to reach down deep and to search her soul and clean the dust out of the creases of my spirit. A beautiful most inspiring poem. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/3/2008 |
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| Amen! we are parts of a body all need to be healthy for us to funtion well. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/3/2008 |
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"Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone"
I find these two line so profound, as I know a few who live like this and do not relize that is what they are doing. This is a beautiful, touching poem, Eileen.
peace and love, Carole~
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/3/2008 |
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| Eileen, I love this...especially the last stanza! |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
5/3/2008 |
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| Your writing touches the soul and heart of everyone who reads it. What a gem you wrote this time. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
5/3/2008 |
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Hi Eileen
I know, it's been a long time since I posted -- a poem or a review -- but I am glad to be doing both now. Does my heart good to see that I recognize most or your reviews here. The line that caught me here -- "No apathy alive in my heart," powerful minimalist paradox!
I am writing almost constantly, but of a different kind. Surely, I've not abandoned poetry, by far; completions are far between times, though. Posted "Ode to Unsung Passings" yesterday.
Love Vicky
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/3/2008 |
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Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone
How so very true, and another great poem, from you! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/3/2008 |
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Another gem from you, Eileen, full of wisdom and hope. EXCELLENT!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/3/2008 |
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ET, you write not only for believers and those full of hope, but also, between the lines are your thoughts to the wounded ones, the ones that only learned not to believe, or trust, or open their hearts.
Internal Interlude invite the late ones to do so.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
5/2/2008 |
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"Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone "
the wisdom in these lines, alone, sums up the lack of some who have no compassion. What a shame is their lives.
Brava Eileen!
Blessings and love,
Susan
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/2/2008 |
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Eileen,
I Love Your Poem
Your wisodm Shines As Always through the depths to the light in your verses!
Embraced ~Embrasse'
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/2/2008 |
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Ontologic-spiritual ponderings wisely composed... Outstanding message delivered through the glowing lines of "Internal Interlude".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/2/2008 |
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Looking in and liking what we see is the goal,,, Very beautiful Eileen,, the photo is perfect.
Love, Chrisitne |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
5/2/2008 |
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"We need not fear what we find
We have tools to renew our mind"
These are my favorite lines of a most beautiful, soul-searching poem. I knew when I clicked on this title, it would be one of your great writes!
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/2/2008 |
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I do look forward to reading your words that you offer us each day Eileen, you write with meaning and it is so enjoyed, Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/2/2008 |
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| Ah, Eileen, you delved deep within the soul with this wonderfully-crafted ode to a superior way of life and to the life-everlasting to come . . . Touching, my friend . . . |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
5/2/2008 |
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| I love this beautifully written poem with the wonderful messages you deliver ... You are always a pleasure to read, Eileen ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/2/2008 |
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Great write, Eileen! This has a good message as well.
Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/2/2008 |
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| To thine own self be true, is still a wise axiom. Great poem |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/2/2008 |
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Deceiving ourselves leads to SO much heartache!
Great write
Cryssa |
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