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Internal Interlude
by E T Waldron
Friday, May 02, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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God said "Let us search out and examine our ways"

G.I.Gurdjieff said "Know Thyself"

I flew within a private place
I had to unveil my inner face
What I saw convinced me
My goal was to be set free
To assure my immortality
Pursue the cause of liberty

Crying out inside my soul
The wish to be made whole
Not to have missing parts
No apathy alive in my heart
Being a friend to one and all
Even the ones who made me fall

Knowing that the greatest sin
Is to live with self as  kin
To blind oneself to others needs
Means we don't sow any seeds
Wasting  time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone

No matter what we may believe
Delve deep inside lest we deceive
Self-deception leads to heartache
Nothing works well if we're  fake
Knowing ourself facing what's true
Helps correct wrong things we do

When we take that inner journey
Unlock our soul with truths key
We need not fear what we  find
We have tools to renew our mind
Learning to arrange our  priority
To be useful members of society

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/7/2008
Self deception is complete when we no longer seek the truth of who we are. Great piece of work, E T. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/4/2008
Eileen,

"To thine own self be true" could apply here - but we can't do it alone, without Creator's help - excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Dee C. 5/4/2008
So painfully honest...but the truth shall set you free.
Fear is so powerful and blinding it truly is an act of faith to take that inner journey.
Thank you for this wonderfully written, thought provoking examination of our inner selves!!
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 5/4/2008
this poem is a gem~
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 5/4/2008
A real jewel. GBQ
Reviewed by Barbara Smith 5/3/2008
Eileen, this is full of truths and honesty...sowers of seeds do reap rewards in Heaven and we have to allow God to guide us in our walk in this life to achieve our journey in the right manner, and to forgive, feel compassion, listen, reach out to others, and allow God to use us in our society in whatever way He deems fit. Your words caused this reader to reach down deep and to search her soul and clean the dust out of the creases of my spirit. A beautiful most inspiring poem.
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/3/2008
Amen! we are parts of a body all need to be healthy for us to funtion well.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 5/3/2008
"Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone"

I find these two line so profound, as I know a few who live like this and do not relize that is what they are doing. This is a beautiful, touching poem, Eileen.
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/3/2008
Eileen, I love this...especially the last stanza!
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/3/2008
Your writing touches the soul and heart of everyone who reads it. What a gem you wrote this time. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 5/3/2008
Hi Eileen
I know, it's been a long time since I posted -- a poem or a review -- but I am glad to be doing both now. Does my heart good to see that I recognize most or your reviews here. The line that caught me here -- "No apathy alive in my heart," powerful minimalist paradox!
I am writing almost constantly, but of a different kind. Surely, I've not abandoned poetry, by far; completions are far between times, though. Posted "Ode to Unsung Passings" yesterday.
Love Vicky
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/3/2008
Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone

How so very true, and another great poem, from you!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/3/2008
Another gem from you, Eileen, full of wisdom and hope. EXCELLENT!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/3/2008
ET, you write not only for believers and those full of hope, but also, between the lines are your thoughts to the wounded ones, the ones that only learned not to believe, or trust, or open their hearts.
Internal Interlude invite the late ones to do so.

Georg
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/2/2008
"Wasting time on self alone
Leaves the soul dry as a bone "

the wisdom in these lines, alone, sums up the lack of some who have no compassion. What a shame is their lives.
Brava Eileen!
Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 5/2/2008
Eileen,
I Love Your Poem
Your wisodm Shines As Always through the depths to the light in your verses!
Embraced ~Embrasse'
Vickie
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/2/2008

Ontologic-spiritual ponderings wisely composed... Outstanding message delivered through the glowing lines of "Internal Interlude".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/2/2008
Looking in and liking what we see is the goal,,, Very beautiful Eileen,, the photo is perfect.
Love, Chrisitne
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 5/2/2008
"We need not fear what we find
We have tools to renew our mind"

These are my favorite lines of a most beautiful, soul-searching poem. I knew when I clicked on this title, it would be one of your great writes!
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/2/2008
I do look forward to reading your words that you offer us each day Eileen, you write with meaning and it is so enjoyed, Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/2/2008
Ah, Eileen, you delved deep within the soul with this wonderfully-crafted ode to a superior way of life and to the life-everlasting to come . . . Touching, my friend . . .
Reviewed by Tiana ~ 5/2/2008
I love this beautifully written poem with the wonderful messages you deliver ... You are always a pleasure to read, Eileen ... hugs
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/2/2008
Great write, Eileen! This has a good message as well.

Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/2/2008
To thine own self be true, is still a wise axiom. Great poem
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/2/2008
Deceiving ourselves leads to SO much heartache!
Great write

Cryssa



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