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When Gentle Breezes Blow
by Cryssa C
Friday, May 02, 2008
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When Gentle Breezes Blow


I think of you in autumn.
I think of you in spring.
And when it’s cold and snow flies
I think of you again.

In the heat of summertime
my mind often drifts your way,
while lazily my thoughts chase
the graying clouds away. 

I wonder do you think of me
when stars come out at night,
or when the sun is blazing hot,
or gentle breezes blow? 

Yet if you never think of me
one question still remains--
With all the memories that we shared…
how did you clear the slate?

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Reviewed by Jerry Engler 5/6/2008
Nice descriptive use of the seasons to create your flow, and then, pow, that question at the end. This is a very creative blend of appreciation for beauties shared and relationship lost...Jerry
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/3/2008
Powerful. did he really care? Your words flowed so easily and softly. Liz
Reviewed by William Potter 5/3/2008
Perhaps we all have someone, from our past that for whatever reason creeps into out thoughts from time to time...
--the last stanza is a question I have often asked.
Well written,

take care
WRP
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/3/2008
yes, some people seem to forget so easily, makes you wonder if they really ever loved or cared...
Reviewed by Art Sun 5/3/2008
Cryssa a sad and yet joy filled poem...the memories and the relationships of many can relate to your poem...

nice work...


Art Sun...
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/3/2008
Beautiful my friend. Wonderful question and powerfully penned. You are something my friend and so is this write. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/3/2008
When gentle breezes blow, like this poem, gives a lift to my wings so I can reach higher goals.

Georg
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/2/2008
Very gentle and meloncholy sort of write so delicately penned....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/2/2008
Wow! Brilliant question,Cryssa! Superb poem,beautifully written!

My eyes are better,but need lots of rest;-)
Thanks for your concern!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/2/2008
Ouch. LOL Powerfully penned sadness - well done, Cryssa.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/2/2008

I like this one for all it has, for all it is... Beauty abounds; art enchants;
romance sings, and a poetic flower scents "When Gentle Breezes Blow".

I salute You, Poet.

In admirtaion,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by George Carroll 5/2/2008
Good question to end a fine poem.
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