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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/6/2008 |
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| Nice descriptive use of the seasons to create your flow, and then, pow, that question at the end. This is a very creative blend of appreciation for beauties shared and relationship lost...Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/3/2008 |
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| Powerful. did he really care? Your words flowed so easily and softly. Liz |
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| Reviewed by William Potter |
5/3/2008 |
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Perhaps we all have someone, from our past that for whatever reason creeps into out thoughts from time to time...
--the last stanza is a question I have often asked.
Well written,
take care
WRP |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/3/2008 |
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| yes, some people seem to forget so easily, makes you wonder if they really ever loved or cared... |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
5/3/2008 |
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Cryssa a sad and yet joy filled poem...the memories and the relationships of many can relate to your poem...
nice work...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
5/3/2008 |
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| Beautiful my friend. Wonderful question and powerfully penned. You are something my friend and so is this write. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/3/2008 |
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When gentle breezes blow, like this poem, gives a lift to my wings so I can reach higher goals.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/2/2008 |
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Very gentle and meloncholy sort of write so delicately penned....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/2/2008 |
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Wow! Brilliant question,Cryssa! Superb poem,beautifully written!
My eyes are better,but need lots of rest;-)
Thanks for your concern!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/2/2008 |
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Ouch. LOL Powerfully penned sadness - well done, Cryssa.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/2/2008 |
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I like this one for all it has, for all it is... Beauty abounds; art enchants;
romance sings, and a poetic flower scents "When Gentle Breezes Blow".
I salute You, Poet.
In admirtaion,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/2/2008 |
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| Good question to end a fine poem. |
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