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Sunday, May 04, 2008
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Daddy back in hospital - would y'all say a prayer for him today?

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman

early morn wake up
is not coffee in the cup
it's the eastern sun

peeling eyes open
to new possibilities
and blessings, given

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/4)


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Reviewed by Jon Willey
My prayer for your dad, done before my reply to your poem was written. I like the positive feel your poem gives me when you so clearly say, "it's the Eastern sun". That puts everything into the proper perspective. "New possibilities and blessings, given". Need we ask more? An excellent poem to remind us of what is truly important in life and where our blessing originate. With Him. Thanks dear lady. May peace be always with you. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Sure will pray for your dad as soon as getting into my bed tonight. Nice double Haiku and blessings are going to come your way. Each day is a new beginning and you are able to live through it and be helpful to all you meet. Fine write again I have to tell you.
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
I will pray for your dad.. Great picture...M
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Love the description of a newly dawning day.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
I will remember your Dad in my prayers Karla, blessings love Holly
Reviewed by Charlie
...the big eye in the sky blinking open... pretty visual, and great philosophy, Karla. I totally agree. --Charlie
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Your poem is stunning, I am praying for your Dad.
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Perfect pair of Haiku's Karla. I wish the best for your dad's health. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Absolutely Karla. Give him my best.
Reviewed by John Leko
...and the skies...opened with a prayer.

my well wishes and prayers for your father Karla...
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Love the back to backs and they say so much about ther reality of the morning. Sorry to hear about your dad but will keep my fingers crossed for him.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Beautiful ,Karla! I'll put your dad on the
boards,and keep him in prayer!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
You dad is a lucky man, to have two of you to love...ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
The prayers are granted, as well with a strong wish of peace.

Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
lovely haiku and yes I will say a prayer for your Dad!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Lovely haiku's Karla...sorry to hear about your dad, will send prayers his way
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by Dee C.
Wonderfully written Karla...what a beautiful morning!!
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Wonderful picture and excellent poem my friend...I too like Jeanette love the line "peeling eyes open" very well done, I will add your dad to our prayer list tonight!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
A wonderful write Karla and yes your daddy will be in our prayers along with you and Karen. Take care cause we do care.

Newfie Hugs and prayers are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
You've painted a wonderful word picture for waking up in the morning. Especially liked: "peeling eyes open
to new possibilities".
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Beautiful picture and words written. My heart goes out to you, Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Beautiful write, and you bet I'll be praying for our daddy!! Very well penned/illustrated; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
a very nice write--sorry about your dad
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Our best wishes and prayers, are on the way.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Nice write, Karla. Prayers sent your way.
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