Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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Monday, May 05, 2008
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... great seismic surges as
the sky labors to bring
forth the storm. It slides from
between clouds, slick with wet ----
not the violence I
expected: no loud cries
of thunder, no flashes
of anger, no waving
fists full of wind and hail:
just a gentle Spring rain.
(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/5)
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|A gentle spring rain birthed without any of the anticipated complications. Because you were the poetic midwife responsible for the delivery. Stay safe. Jon Michael Willey|
|Reviewed by Jerry Engler
|Great analogy, Karla, both to birth and earthquakes, fractures of the sky. I like it....Jerry|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|I love how your language suggests to "us" the coming gentle shower of "cumulus congestus"... You're a walking cloud chart!|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...the word gentle...gives your title...everything.
|Reviewed by Charlie
|A very romantic story of birth-- and life, and GOD BLESS THE RAIN! --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|A gentle touch from nature! May the sky rain love this time. Karla.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Just a gentle spring rain - God how I love those.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Excellent writing sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...but, can man fly a kite there?
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great postitive poem Karla, glad you found gentleness in a poetic storm, hugzs|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|One of the most beautiful things about this season...a gentle rain shower.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautiful! unlike the horror of 15000 dead in Burma,and no one knows how many more injured and missing. Enough to overwhelm the senses!
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Is it just me or are the storms more deliberate this year/
Blessings and love,
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Beautifully painted picture.....|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Excellent description, concise, precise.
I like that kind of gentle rain in a Spring landscape.
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|A gentle Spring rain sounds nice. :)|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|finally no harsh weather this time. You were due a gentle spring rain. Great write. Liz|
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Hope it is always a gentle rain for you, Karla ... Wonderful poem ... hugs|
|Reviewed by Kathryn Collins
"the sky labors to bring forth the storm" "slick with wet" fist "full of wind and hail"
you are the word wizard in this one and I'm happy it's "just a gentle Sprin rain."
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|A very tender and loveing write...beautiful!!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i think this is lovely|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Well I must say this weather can be very welcoming, thank you for sharing a little peacefullness Karla.
Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|What a poetic way to describe birth... the birth of a storm... Well done!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Very nice, clever usage of verse that shows the gentler side of Spring. How I wish we'd have more tranquil days like this, without the threat of severe! The rain is rather enjoyable today, for a change! Very well penned/illsutrated! BRAVA, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Guess what My next posting is Call
"Birth OF Death"
Its about the weather
Checkm it out
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|How beautiful the pic and the poem. Lovely, lovely write. Love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Well described and let us pray over the next few days that is all we see this time around, well done...
Be always safe,