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Birth
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Monday, May 05, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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... great seismic surges as
the sky labors to bring
forth the storm.  It slides from
between clouds, slick with wet ----
not the violence I
expected:  no loud cries
of thunder, no flashes
of anger, no waving
fists full of wind and hail:
just a gentle Spring rain.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/5)

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/8/2008
A gentle spring rain birthed without any of the anticipated complications. Because you were the poetic midwife responsible for the delivery. Stay safe. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 5/8/2008
Great analogy, Karla, both to birth and earthquakes, fractures of the sky. I like it....Jerry
Reviewed by Michael Guy 5/8/2008
I love how your language suggests to "us" the coming gentle shower of "cumulus congestus"... You're a walking cloud chart!
Reviewed by John Leko 5/6/2008
...the word gentle...gives your title...everything.
excellent Karla...
John
Reviewed by Charlie 5/6/2008
A very romantic story of birth-- and life, and GOD BLESS THE RAIN! --Charlie
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 5/6/2008
A gentle touch from nature! May the sky rain love this time. Karla.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/6/2008
Just a gentle spring rain - God how I love those.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/6/2008
Excellent writing sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/6/2008
...but, can man fly a kite there?

Georg
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/5/2008
great postitive poem Karla, glad you found gentleness in a poetic storm, hugzs
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/5/2008
One of the most beautiful things about this season...a gentle rain shower.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/5/2008
Beautiful! unlike the horror of 15000 dead in Burma,and no one knows how many more injured and missing. Enough to overwhelm the senses!


Love,
ET
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/5/2008
Is it just me or are the storms more deliberate this year/

Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/5/2008
Beautifully painted picture.....
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/5/2008
Excellent description, concise, precise.
I like that kind of gentle rain in a Spring landscape.

Axilea
Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner 5/5/2008
A gentle Spring rain sounds nice. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/5/2008
finally no harsh weather this time. You were due a gentle spring rain. Great write. Liz
Reviewed by ** ** 5/5/2008
Hope it is always a gentle rain for you, Karla ... Wonderful poem ... hugs
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins 5/5/2008
Karla -
"the sky labors to bring forth the storm" "slick with wet" fist "full of wind and hail"

you are the word wizard in this one and I'm happy it's "just a gentle Sprin rain."

truly beautiful.

love,
Kathy
Reviewed by Dee C. 5/5/2008
A very tender and loveing write...beautiful!!
~HUGS~
Dee
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/5/2008
i think this is lovely
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/5/2008
Well I must say this weather can be very welcoming, thank you for sharing a little peacefullness Karla.
Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/5/2008
What a poetic way to describe birth... the birth of a storm... Well done!
Cryssa
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/5/2008
Very nice, clever usage of verse that shows the gentler side of Spring. How I wish we'd have more tranquil days like this, without the threat of severe! The rain is rather enjoyable today, for a change! Very well penned/illsutrated! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/5/2008
Outstanding Karla
Guess what My next posting is Call
"Birth OF Death"
Yep!!!
Its about the weather
Checkm it out
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/5/2008
How beautiful the pic and the poem. Lovely, lovely write. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/5/2008
Well described and let us pray over the next few days that is all we see this time around, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen



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