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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/8/2008 |
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| A gentle spring rain birthed without any of the anticipated complications. Because you were the poetic midwife responsible for the delivery. Stay safe. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/8/2008 |
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| Great analogy, Karla, both to birth and earthquakes, fractures of the sky. I like it....Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/8/2008 |
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| I love how your language suggests to "us" the coming gentle shower of "cumulus congestus"... You're a walking cloud chart! |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/6/2008 |
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...the word gentle...gives your title...everything.
excellent Karla...
John |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
5/6/2008 |
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| A very romantic story of birth-- and life, and GOD BLESS THE RAIN! --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
5/6/2008 |
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| A gentle touch from nature! May the sky rain love this time. Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/6/2008 |
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| Just a gentle spring rain - God how I love those. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/6/2008 |
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| Excellent writing sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/6/2008 |
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...but, can man fly a kite there?
Georg |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/5/2008 |
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| great postitive poem Karla, glad you found gentleness in a poetic storm, hugzs |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/5/2008 |
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| One of the most beautiful things about this season...a gentle rain shower. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/5/2008 |
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Beautiful! unlike the horror of 15000 dead in Burma,and no one knows how many more injured and missing. Enough to overwhelm the senses!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
5/5/2008 |
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Is it just me or are the storms more deliberate this year/
Blessings and love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/5/2008 |
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| Beautifully painted picture..... |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/5/2008 |
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Excellent description, concise, precise.
I like that kind of gentle rain in a Spring landscape.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
5/5/2008 |
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| A gentle Spring rain sounds nice. :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/5/2008 |
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| finally no harsh weather this time. You were due a gentle spring rain. Great write. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
5/5/2008 |
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| Hope it is always a gentle rain for you, Karla ... Wonderful poem ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Kathryn Collins |
5/5/2008 |
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Karla -
"the sky labors to bring forth the storm" "slick with wet" fist "full of wind and hail"
you are the word wizard in this one and I'm happy it's "just a gentle Sprin rain."
truly beautiful.
love,
Kathy
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
5/5/2008 |
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A very tender and loveing write...beautiful!!
~HUGS~
Dee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/5/2008 |
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| i think this is lovely |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/5/2008 |
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Well I must say this weather can be very welcoming, thank you for sharing a little peacefullness Karla.
Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/5/2008 |
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What a poetic way to describe birth... the birth of a storm... Well done!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/5/2008 |
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Very nice, clever usage of verse that shows the gentler side of Spring. How I wish we'd have more tranquil days like this, without the threat of severe! The rain is rather enjoyable today, for a change! Very well penned/illsutrated! BRAVA, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/5/2008 |
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Outstanding Karla
Guess what My next posting is Call
"Birth OF Death"
Yep!!!
Its about the weather
Checkm it out
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
5/5/2008 |
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| How beautiful the pic and the poem. Lovely, lovely write. Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/5/2008 |
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Well described and let us pray over the next few days that is all we see this time around, well done...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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