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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/8/2008 |
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Though the Power of Love conquers all 'out of time' it is still so hard to watch Love Ones die, even if given hospice or modern medicines. This is a fine tribute to their love and I ask "The Creator" who I am sure will be by your Dad's side in this. It is the one time we all face "Alone" with God. I know when my Dad was dying in 2003 the last day before he went under, he was pointing to what I believe was an angel or even Jesus (by the look on his face) who came to help him. You couldn't know by his words because due to Alzheimer's he could only make giberish with his mouth. But he wrote down bible sayings as prayers on little cards all his life - so I knew who had finally come to ease his suffering...
Later, michael |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
5/7/2008 |
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| A breathtakingly beautiful tribute to their love, Bernice. There is a place that cannot be filled, that waits for reunion to be whole again. Poems like this will be a continual comfort in your and your Mother's time of need. God bless you and your family--I will pray for you all. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/7/2008 |
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A beautiful Write Bernice
The true meaning of love till the end of time
Thank you for sharing this Jewel Of a write
Love & Peace be with you, Your Dad & Mom
William |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/6/2008 |
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...tribute to life and love...given so much beauty...as to recognize its worth...in all pages of ink...is what you give us here Bernice.
in sadness and prayer...
John |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
5/6/2008 |
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The immortal hero Wesley said: Death cannot stop true love. All it can do is delay it for a while...
I believe that. Maybe not even really delay it--
Heart-breaking, emotive offering here, Bernice. God bless you. I hope He holds you gently while you sleep. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/6/2008 |
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Beautiful Morning Bernice,
I Have Shivers.
There Is Truly No Better Place as your closing verse...
"this unity can never be broken
and no true r place have you
ever belonged
than in this space
Mine...."
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/6/2008 |
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| I'm so sorry for the suffering of your Dad and Mom and for your own. Your poem is a deeply touching tribute to real eternal love. Blessings to all of you. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/6/2008 |
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Love Songs should have this poem as a parameter to have the sincerity sound that goes hand in hand with that kind of awe that make us to have a little of envy...but a good one.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/6/2008 |
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| Oh my,how beautiful your words are sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/5/2008 |
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| Gorgeous, poignant,inspiring...and yes...powerful. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/5/2008 |
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What a glorious tribute to unconditional forever love, and to your parents, Bernice! I hope you send this to your mom she will treasure it! My prayers are with them...
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
5/5/2008 |
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| Truly beautiful and heart wrenching. Prayers and love to your Mother & Mine. Warmth and Love to you and Nina. Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/5/2008 |
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Inspiring, profound and wonderful.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/5/2008 |
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Beautiful Bernice, beautiful and he will always be her's, in her thoughts, her heart and her mind, every second of everyday, Her's. Thank you for sharing such touching words.
Newfie Hugs and prayers are with you, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/5/2008 |
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(((HUGS))) and many prayers; God be with you during this heartbreaking time!
With much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! < |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/5/2008 |
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Your aside or last line says it all, Bernice...
But it surely doesn't make it easier!
My heart and prayers go out to you and yours...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/5/2008 |
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Very emotional write but done with sensitivity and love not only your mother's but your own shines through. Very well done and again I am sure your mother and step father both will appreciate and maybe ease both of their burdens even if only for a short time.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/5/2008 |
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Bernice,
My prayers are with you and yours. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/5/2008 |
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| Beautiful heartwrenching and heartwarming poem. I know you all are struggling through your dad's death and you and your family are in my prayers. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
5/5/2008 |
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| Not only is your writing beautiful, but your heart's love for your parents is beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/5/2008 |
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| BEAUTIFUL, VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/5/2008 |
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| Great tribute to your mother Bernice, poetically and expressively , sympathies go out for you dear poetess, hugs |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/5/2008 |
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(((Bernice)))
No words - except, I'm sorry -
(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla. :( |
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