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Old New Dreams
by E T Waldron
Monday, May 05, 2008
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this has to be a dream
i'm alone by a stream
the wind blows stealthily
and white feathers gather
into the form of a cape
and wrap around my shoulders

last night i dreamed i painted
these feathers in a headress
and the profile of an indian woman
wearing them,it was beautiful
the feathers edged with a
rainbow of soft pastels

this morning i awoke seeing
a yomg buck set a fire outside
a teepee, i heard drums beating
but as i got out of bed the vision
disappeared

now i'm by this stream,and
suddenly the drums beat again
and i begin a melodic chant
stunned that it is coming from me

i run away through the forest
and the feathers come apart
floating all around me,and a
tree shouts" you can't run away
from yourself" and i wake up

etw-2008

 



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Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 5/12/2008
BEAUTIFUL IMAGES IN YOUR DREAM POEM!....Its true , we can't run away from our selves.....M
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/9/2008
well done poetic insight into the dream world Eileen, and in your poem as you stated, "we can not run from ourselves" however God can help us understand ourselves better and change negative dreams, hugs
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/8/2008
Dreams, reality skirted by the brush of fantasies. Another masterful write E T. You have skillfully captured the essence of a nocturnal experience. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 5/8/2008
Captivating in both style and imagery.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/7/2008
I've tried before, don't work
I accept meself though...
Neat dream and music Eileen..
Love ya
Ron
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/7/2008
A sweet dream we all wish not to wake from
Beautifully composed Eileen
Love & Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 5/6/2008
My, what an adventure! The feathers edged with pastels sound great. Love to see them. Glad you woke up in one piece!
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 5/6/2008
What a dream with a profound ending, Eileen ... Wonderfully written ... hugs
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 5/6/2008
Impressive images, your dreams, E.T. More beautiful your words of telling. I always wonder about dreams I have similar to this...are they from our past, or our future? Or are they simply images implanted in our minds from something we've read or seen?
Dream on, dear friend!
Love ~ Micke
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/6/2008
Wow, one lovely dream filled with the images of a more peaceful time spent by a stream. When life was young and all around was once pristing and no, you can hide but you can never run away from who you are, exquisitely stated...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Barbara Smith 5/6/2008
Eileen, your dream brings fantastic images and leaves this reader with glorious imaginations...trying to run away from yourself but find life is the same regardless of our dreams. I enjoyed this.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/6/2008
Deeply effecting, effective lines, Eileen - powerfully penned truths in verse - well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

*might want to check spelling of 'young' in the line, 'a yomg buck set a fire outside'* :)
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/6/2008
This is very very deeap and profound. It is stacked with a truth athat many have not yet recognized....
Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/6/2008
What a wonderful beautiful dream. I felt I was actually there. What a picture you paint with your words. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/6/2008
A beautiful dream Eileen, and dreams are so real like at times but as others have said we can run from almost anyone but not ourselves. Thank you for sharing,

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/6/2008
I am a living testament that you can't run away from yourself, Eileen . . . You read "Misdemeanors & Felonies: A Memoir," so you know something of which I am talking about . . . Yourself will eventually catch up with you if you are lucky . . . Like me . . .
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/6/2008
You can't run away from yourself - how so very true, and I have many strange dreams that I no longer run from, but truly wish I could understand.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/6/2008
Waking up in that dream teepee should had make your spirit to soar.

Georg
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 5/6/2008
A winged spirit, I wonder what that could be! Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/6/2008
Very nice writing sweet lady,have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/6/2008
Taken back in time,,in dream and spirit,,,with 'Great Message'
Well done Eileen!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/6/2008

An outstanding depicting of a Vision painted with the colors of the rainbow of wisdom.

I salute You, Poet.

In reverent admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/6/2008
Eileen,

A beautiful dream with a rather haunting ending. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/6/2008
Great write and midi, Eileen; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Much wisdom here.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/5/2008
"you can't run away from yourself"... so, so true!
Cryssa
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/5/2008
"you can't run away
from yourself"...much wisdom...and so very true.
Reviewed by Morning Star 5/5/2008
I love it it sounds to me that our muse
gather our spirits and wrote about the beauty
Of the Native American traditions
I'm going to read about your dream to see what it means
On the N A dreams!
This is a gem of a write Eileen
I hope you viewed my video that is
Found on my Biography page
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning Star
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/5/2008
i enjoyed this and the wisdom at the end was great!
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