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Desert Rock
by stan n nassano
Tuesday, May 06, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Desert Rock

I found you
a desert rock, that
captures the essence
of both you and the
desert
I dearly……..behold
bride of mystery
swirling in passion
colors of sun
setting on the horizon
the blue of sky
turquoise in morning
layer upon layer  
           all
blending together
sleeping away a story
untold
glittering with star dust
shining like
moon
hard and cold to the grip
soft to the
touch
a work of God’s art
still
being formed
Snasssano 5-06-08

 

 

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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/9/2008
Very nice writing dear man..well done ..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/6/2008
At the heart of matter and spiritual feelings.
This poems speaks directly to the reader's senses.
A beautiful work of poetic observation... I behold...

Axilea
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 5/6/2008
I agree. This is your best. TYou're in your element and doing what you love and your passion for the envirom,emt is your calling. keep your poetry of the earth close to your heart and, when your adventures give you time, have them published. You're doing just fine!
Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/6/2008
I have to agree with anessa, this is one of your finest and the simplistic beauty of it's images is stunning. well done my friend.
fee
Reviewed by blue soplain 5/6/2008
there isnt enough space for me to speak here. ....the BEST thing ive read of yours. ...hands... down...hands down the best.
even the aeshetics are beautiful; the offset of words and contrasts. the space of empty before 'all'. ..the double intendre of 'i found you a desert rock'opening the poem .. . as if you found a simple enough rock, full of meaning and wonder and beauty, but you also found a person LIKE a desert rock; hard, lonely, vast, enigmatic, extreme, wild, desperate for water to make them into something...soemthing...MORE. ...heat and cold, wind and rain. ...and how you lay different meanings into each line [do other people see this like i do????] i.e.::
"blending [together/sleeping]. . "
"touch/a work of God's art. ." as if we could reach out and know it simply by blind faith
"art/still/being formed"...which is read first like obviously,m Gods work is not finished as yet, but also---> a command 'still' and then with jsut a hushed and provocative word, the 'being [is] formed'....breathed into life.....from brittle dust comes a star. . .
again, the msot stunning thing ive read of yours
i have shivers.
m mm
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Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/6/2008
This has a little bit of an ethereal quality and gauzy mystique to it. Love the ending...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Charlie 5/6/2008
God, the artist; his medium? The earth-- beautiful thoughts. --Charlie



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