|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Lovely rhythm that rocks gently.
This is a very evocative poem.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|This poem has a fine patina and its image is etched in time like its subject.
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|i love these writes of yours reeds and waters,old boats.....so cool
i also love the pictures nice work,glad i was abl etoget on line and read your work...take care ....
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Susan, those memories carry a lot of clout and we never want to lose them. Excellent writing.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I love the melancholy feeling here Sue!~
as memories are never to be forgotten~!
It's been awhile for me HERE, *(Sorry Sue) but I plan to plant myself HERE awhile and read your heart!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...the images you give memories worn...find they remain above waters...emotion...forever.
beautiful poetry Susan...
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Lies in the older boat
It surely does, and I have many memories in mine.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|well written--makes one think|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very well done Susan.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Just a question, die boat from age, or it is just we that discard them when our eyes tell us so?
Yes, boats have memories too, one just need to go onboard and listen.
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|It's a nice one, it's true. I can see why it's your favorite. How you love those marshes and inlets. Cheers|
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|This is such great poetry, I love the way you allways paint a picture so beautifully with your words.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful writing, Susan; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Memories still afloat, nice boat wish i was afloat with you.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|When you gives us a life's lesson no on can flesh out the ebbs and tides quite like my friend Susan . . . At the end of the day . . . Still some painted flakes dot the life that was . . . Amazingly accurate . . .|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I know this feeling well. Back in my younger years my first ship was a fairly new Icebreaker very fancy and all the luxurys, but the ship I loved the best was an old one that was form WWII and it became a home to me.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|How wonderfully nostalgic
Last 4 lines sublime
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Profound and wise poetic-philosophic expression in artful imagery.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh my goodness this is so soulful and simply gorgeous Susan.|