by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, May 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A fictional romantic poem expressing love wrote in the singular.
Your love fell on me like
a ton of bricks,
I am a man of vanity,
I have no tricks.
I would never hire a magician,
but instead I think I need
a heart physician.
After your love blast,
my heart is beating too fast.
I refuse to go to
the doctor you know,
because I really don't
want this heart to slow.
I'm a sucker for your love kiss,
I want to keep my honey bliss.
As long as this love remain,
it will keep my world sane.
I reach out to your lovely hand,
freeze up the hour glass sand,
enjoying this feeling so grand.
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Good loving write and good tribute to love. Wish I had my love back in my life, but he is with me in spirit. Good writing and hit my heart too.|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|you just keep getting better!!!! This is loaded with sweets and lots of sugar...from the first line to the very last, and your art work is beautiful too, I remember you saying they were yours?|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Your love fell on me like
a ton of bricks
Amazing how that happens some times!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,beautiful writing from such a loving and sweet sweet man...enjoy your day and be safe ...Hugssssss
Chanti Lace xoxo
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Very sweet write, Gem; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Sweet words!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan