|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|OOOOOOOOOOH that's my BED!! Oi, where did you get a pic of my BED from????
OoOPs better read the poem haha.
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|A very passionate write.|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|"...Tongues part lips" to say the very least. It is HOT in here Fee! and I am blushing pink....|
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|Fee--now that is the feeling a bedchamber should convey.
I am going to post this in my bedroom as I redecorate.
Great inspiration. Red satin is the way to go.
Got me going this early in the morning.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I Love The Castle era & Love the word palace & now bedchamber
& hold me hostage ionside that room anyday! That is one masterful picture Fee!! Beautiful!
Now the Sensual Lovingness of the Poem is just Devine! The Love of Love poured into the words you have chosen are those of a Loyal Dedicated Honorable Knight. You are Masterful Poet!
This is Lovely Poem
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Stacatto lines well done.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|For me, only if that bed have approved Olympic measurements.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this speaks of passionate and possibly forbidden love-very passionate!|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow Felix some write here, what can I say that would be alright, ok I'll let Susan say it all for me. Thank you for sharing now I will head off to my bedchamber. lol
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Blessings and love,
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Whoa I love this one a night of passion
inviting bed awaits the desire, hungers
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|I like my chocolate bittersweet but not my farewells....
Another one of your explosives writes, Fee. Love those, can't get enough!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|wow,, What a night of passion,, a sweet bitter farewell indeed