I'll Wait For Your Return
by Rose M Rideout
Thursday, May 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Well I thought this would be different for me for a change as I wait for Hubby's return.
I’ll Wait For Your Return
Long through the night I waited,
My heart longed for you so,
The tears I tried to hide,
I didn’t want to see you go.
My lips they needed tender care,
My body longed for your touch,
Through candlelight and sipping wine,
I needed you so much.
My body how it trembles,
It’s wet from all desires,
The very thoughts of you next to me,
Has set my heart on fire.
I sway to the soft music,
Love words ringing in the air,
Oh how I long to have you close,
To feed me tender loving care.
Feel the silkiness of my thigh,
Rub your fingers through my hair,
Pull me closer to you darling,
Hold me while you linger near.
Rest your body upon mine,
As we move our bodies in and out,
For making love with you is a pleasure,
That’s what love is all about.
We are not strangers,
We have become as one,
And find our time together,
Is as pleasing as it comes.
I’ll continue to wait between the sheets,
I’ll wait patiently alone,
My heart will keep on beating wild,
Until your return home.
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|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Filled with passionate longing. Wonderful, sensuous writing, Rose.|
|Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar
|I agree with Bernice (below). I was about to write almost those same exact words and then I saw her comment.
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Very sensual and erotic!!! What a treat He has waiting on return...beautiful write|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Well, that was a scrumptious bit of romantic lust now, wasn't it? Great job Rose!
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|This is a lovely sonnet~`*|
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|Well, even though he's gone, sounds like you have a pretty good fantasy going there.
Great write and I know Fred feels the same.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,Breath Taking sweet Rose..have a wonderful and safe day sweet lady...Hugssssss|
|Reviewed by Fred Rideout (Reader)
|Please,please don't let that flight be late leaving.............Loves Ya|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite Passionate, and I hope you recite it to Hubby when he returns home!|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|When hubby reads this,, wow he just might be back a bit sooner,, very passionate write Rose.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Most beautiful, romantic, sweet words!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|If that's you in the above picture I can't imagine why he went anywhere! ! !
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very moving and touching write and as Fred will be at my house tonight I shall pass along your wishes.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write of longing, Rose, as only you can do. Very well written and imaged; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love comin' y'all's way from Texas,
As always, your friend, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh the lonliness one feels when separated from the other half. Words of true endearment as you patiently wait for his return, into your arms. The heartwarming love shared between the two is very evident, well said...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful, passionate longing - oh, the reunion you'll have upon Hubby's return! :) He won't want to leave - excellently penned, Rose.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|pasionate and loving--i enjoyed this and it is a different write from you|