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Sagging Doesn't Appeal to Me
by Susie N McCray
Friday, May 09, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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This poem shows how I feel when I meet a man who's appearance is not as appealing as I want it to be.

You walk up to me

And spit your slick line

You tell me I'm what

You've been looking for all your life

But something tells me

To look down

And your pants are hanging down

All I can say is, "Pull your pants up, son"


When I turn around

And continue on my way

You attempt to step up your game

And claim that you

Could take care of me

But with your jeans

Around your knees

You can't do nothing for me


As I get closer to my door

I look out the corner of my eye

And see you running up behind

Talking about how much

Dough you holding

How much dope you smoking

If you really thinking

I'mma waist my time on you


I got goals to reach

And people to teach

Bills to pay

A son to raise

So all you can do

Is let me tell you

What your mama shoulda

Get out my face...and pull your damn pants up

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
I have to laugh with each time you tell him to pull up those pants, you have no idea how many times I have thought of those same words when I see a guy or kid or whatever walking down the street with pants way down...I sometimes wonder, if he wants to show off his undies, he should at least wear a pair that are different or at least clean...LOL, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Tracy Hustus
Ok I see you are a girl with Morals !!! Good for you !! You need to carry a fly swatter to get rid of those flies !!!! You rock !!
Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton
I love this! Delightful read... Blessings, Janice
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
lol-I have seen this & I don't like it either seeing a mans johnies & his butt outa the jeans, I could care less about undies. I did try to envision that man trying to
a well groomed man is a good thing
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Reviewed by Mary Coe
I hate those sagging pants. Some of them just sag way too much. A good write.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
lol. Such wise words and clear intent. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I agree. Sagging pants is not acceptable in my eyes; it shows laziness and uncaring attitude. I also hate those pants that have the writing across the butt; they should ban those types of pants!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
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