|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I have found that the only way that my love pains are healed are through a new love... ...and still, there is always a lingering ache that remains. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The bitterness is sweetened by the well-chosen words.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Wonderful expression of a failed romance. I truly feel your emotions and inner feelings about this. thanks dear friend, it is a pleasure to read you always.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Time is the captive release of the inflictions of passions love.
Time stands still so that I will feel my loss too from the passions of love I can no longer embrace,
until the heart heals its wounds I stand still at he mercy of the sands of time.
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Jon, it's difficult to rid one's self from the ghost that lingers in our hearts...time doesn't heal the grip the ghost has on our souls and our eternal memories that keep us captors to them. A fantastic write.|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|wow,great...there's always second chance...i remember Alchemist,the book by Coelho..with words upto such effect..whatever happens for the first time might not happen again,but whatever happens for the second chance might happen for third....but after third ???? Always a positive approach....good write|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|This conveys the beauty of one not drowning in quick sand,, but living and yes taking that chance on love and romance....Your words are inspirations for a song in many hearts. :)
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Excellent writing sweet man,enjoyed very much...stay safe and well dear friend...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Thank you so much Jon for penning the puzzles of words in my heart, unable to quite grasp those floating thoughts into something that makes sense. Your poem uniquely and beautifully conveys the yearning and torture of breaking free of failed romance and dreaming for second chance. Well Done! Deborah:)|