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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/14/2008 |
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Enjoying your form of poetry, that says so much in your compact way...beautiful and colorful saturation!
Blessings ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
5/14/2008 |
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I like your youtful poetry. I like reading it as it picks up delightful things to be considered ... along the way. 'Tis facinating. Am reading you, and hope to make another comment or two, soon. Keep fresh! - Bill
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/13/2008 |
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| Exquisite poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/13/2008 |
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| Fantastic poem Michelle. JMW |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/12/2008 |
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Rich, warm sensuous, so sensuous
John |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
5/12/2008 |
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| I like it too-lovely..." we spread rainfall on the sunsets"-nicely done |
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
5/12/2008 |
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| I like it, Good Poem - Take care |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/12/2008 |
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since night was still exploding
and the moon was on your arms
I saw myself within them
these memories were alive
your hands on stems and petals
on my waist and blackest eyes
Truly lovely verses, Michelle. I do appreciate your unique style. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis (Reg) |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/12/2008 |
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I enjoyed your words a lot, thank you for sharing Michelle.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/12/2008 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet lady,enjoyed...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/12/2008 |
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Black, grey, color saturation:
the chromatic aspects of your poem
are very immediate.
Then come the setting, situation
and slowly burning feelings
that stay with the reader.
Beautiful and lasting.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/12/2008 |
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Michelle,
A poetic masterpiece. Putting our emotions on canvas is what it's all about my friend. You've laid it out in Technicolor. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/11/2008 |
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...beautiful poetry here Michelle...richest colors you give words...to become everything.
excellent...
John |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
5/11/2008 |
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| That last stanza is killer intelligent, soft, and fantastically vivid. It reminds me a bit of Blake (one of my favorite poets)-- and I noticed you had a quote from him on your bio. The poem works-- the rythm, the slanted rhymes, the visuals... it just works. --Charlie |
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