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Michelle M Mead

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Saturation
by Michelle M Mead

Sunday, May 11, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Based on a painting...forget which....


 
 
 
thin sheets
of you and i
i can see your face
through mine
and we spread
rainfall on the sunsets
when we open our mouths,
if we open our mouths this time,
searching silent lines.

Must we realize
the breadcrumbs
have all been eaten
by the black-winged birds
still seeking,
and we've left no trace
for we were just sleeping,
wrapped in nature's greying lace
the edges at our twined feet,
and bound as one to earth
too long to venture home?

I thought I dreamt
but in color saturation
with my handprint on your heart
and you still smelled of freedom
and the lilacs that you gave me
were whispering to the stars
I laughed and told them "Quiet"
though i really meant go on,
since night was still exploding
and the moon was on your arms
I saw myself within them
these memories were alive
your hands on stems and petals
on my waist and blackest eyes.

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Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 5/14/2008
Enjoying your form of poetry, that says so much in your compact way...beautiful and colorful saturation!
Blessings ~~ Micke
Reviewed by F William Broome 5/14/2008
I like your youtful poetry. I like reading it as it picks up delightful things to be considered ... along the way. 'Tis facinating. Am reading you, and hope to make another comment or two, soon. Keep fresh! - Bill

Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/13/2008
Exquisite poetry!
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/13/2008
Fantastic poem Michelle. JMW
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/12/2008
Rich, warm sensuous, so sensuous
John
Reviewed by Dark Knight 5/12/2008
I like it too-lovely..." we spread rainfall on the sunsets"-nicely done
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy 5/12/2008
I like it, Good Poem - Take care
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/12/2008
since night was still exploding
and the moon was on your arms
I saw myself within them
these memories were alive
your hands on stems and petals
on my waist and blackest eyes

Truly lovely verses, Michelle. I do appreciate your unique style. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis (Reg)
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/12/2008
I enjoyed your words a lot, thank you for sharing Michelle.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/12/2008
Beautiful writing sweet lady,enjoyed...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/12/2008
Black, grey, color saturation:
the chromatic aspects of your poem
are very immediate.
Then come the setting, situation
and slowly burning feelings
that stay with the reader.
Beautiful and lasting.

Axilea
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/12/2008
Michelle,

A poetic masterpiece. Putting our emotions on canvas is what it's all about my friend. You've laid it out in Technicolor. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by John Leko 5/11/2008
...beautiful poetry here Michelle...richest colors you give words...to become everything.
excellent...
John
Reviewed by Charlie 5/11/2008
That last stanza is killer intelligent, soft, and fantastically vivid. It reminds me a bit of Blake (one of my favorite poets)-- and I noticed you had a quote from him on your bio. The poem works-- the rythm, the slanted rhymes, the visuals... it just works. --Charlie
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