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| Reviewed by Anna M |
5/15/2008 |
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| This is a beautiful poem, full of depth and rich in imagery... |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/15/2008 |
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Fee, you haven't got the picture when she is waving with both arms? no? what a shame! This poem should melt her...
Please don't fall into the ice waters, everything shrinks there.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/15/2008 |
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Fee,
Beautiful & Lovely Write
Your Heart Is To Warm To Be Froze :)
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/15/2008 |
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Fee, I love this line in the first stanza..."And prayed for sun to stop the night." Beautiful writing.
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/14/2008 |
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| i enjoyed this |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
5/14/2008 |
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Wow, Yes you have met her....A while ago...she stands looking out to sea, remember~ She's a monument..She's in need of thawing too.
Well done Fee, as expressed before, that last stanza really cuts ....like ICCCE :)
Popcicle Hugs Cherrypie |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ |
5/14/2008 |
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| Wow! If it wasn't for this beautiful tropical weather I'm having ;) I'd be shivering to the bone! Sending you some warm sunshine and island rum ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
5/14/2008 |
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| Very nice writing! Love the autobiographical component - I can visualize everything. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
5/14/2008 |
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| Oh, Felix, this is exceptional. You should be very, very proud of this poem! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/14/2008 |
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| This turns me blue just to read it, Felix! I love the rugged experience and reality of your lines, coupled with the fantastic twist in the final stanza which makes me realise just what happens in the mind when the body is that frozen! : A wonderful mix of the actual and the surreal. xx |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
5/14/2008 |
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The embracing of all that is one(self) is quite inspirational within itself. A remarkable sharing I certainly enjoyed the entirity of this presentation and the gathering of words.
Continued enlightenments in all you do,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/14/2008 |
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| I think I've met her a time or two myself, and I like your poem! |
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| Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller |
5/13/2008 |
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Wow--Four o'clock must be a very inspirational time for you.
This is beautiful. I have disliked the cold ever since falling through the ice as a teen. Yet there is an alluring beauty in your lines.
At least while I am sitting here warm in my fluffs.
But seriously, this is going in my favorites file.
Sweets--RaeLynn |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
5/13/2008 |
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This image rich poem reminds me of Hans Christian Anderson's "The Snow Queen". I was raised in Upper Michigan in my preteens, and it got so cold there, that we thought we were in the arctic. Thank you for sharing Felix. I felt the cold, and slept beneath the tall spruce, I saw the duck blind, and I saw the devil's smoke, when you exhaled. I saw you shiver from the icy cold waters of the North Atlantic ocean. I saw you on the Coast Guard vessel being given dry clothes and sip of rum. This is one that should be published in every magazine you can think of, it is that good.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/13/2008 |
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Sincerity and mysticism fills the imagination in this beautiful, wondrous piece and photograph....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/13/2008 |
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Fee,
Can,t say that I blame you. That picture is surely captivating. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/13/2008 |
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Awesome poem I love the last four stanza
absolutely breaking lines
excellent visuals and brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Hugessss...Morning star |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/13/2008 |
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| Oh my,Breath Taking sweet Fee..love the picture..oh myyyyy..have a wonderful evening..Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/13/2008 |
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| Such an epic poem. Captured your heart? Frozen in time. What a romantic you are. Excellent. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/13/2008 |
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wow,, your poem is amazing,, love the line "Prayed for the sun to stop the night" ,, really a masterpiece Fee,, and the photo as well is stunning.....
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/13/2008 |
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Absolutel beautiful Cuz, I love the picture and see where your words came from as I gaze at it. Thank you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/13/2008 |
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| Glad I never had to experience the cold that you must have faced. Winter in Germany was no cake walk but it pales in comparison. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/13/2008 |
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You have painted wonderful, beautiful, and sad artwork with your words, Fee! The images are so strong with each stanza, building to the final that is...outstanding!! I'm in awe of this poem you've written so....damn good!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/13/2008 |
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Beautiful and lovely images you've sown in my mind with this piece...and that last line is a breath of fresh air, I see it both ways romantic and sad, very fresh new lines, love it!
hugs
B |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/13/2008 |
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Beautifully imaged, Fee, BRRRRRRR! Well done, glad you survived the Arctic.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
5/13/2008 |
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A fascinating tale of your frigid adventures, and what an indictment against the unidentified Ice Queen Princess. She certainly needs thawing out! Very well done, Fe!
Shivering,
Connie |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
5/13/2008 |
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great lines....good to read now that's it's a tad warmer,
stan |
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