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No Review Screw
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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You all got to forgive me or don't, I'll write about anything cause it is what I like doing. I'm only writing this for fun, so put up your gun, however it will stun. I could care less whether anyone reviews my work. Here's the MO every since I've been here for 8 years, 3 or 4 reviews that's it, sometimes more. Then I click into a friends den, poem wrote on the same day, he/she has 15 reviews or more. Kiss my azz, I know the deal around here, been knowing it for years. Anyway I like writing more than I like reviewing. When I write a review I only be visiting my friends and sensible poets that's all, and this is very few. I'm not teaching no one how to write or how to do verse, period. This isn't a school, then again it is. My typing has greatly improved typing out this verse everyday, and I've learned some new words. Words like phuck, azz and some more intelligent ones like sublime. This is in 5-7-5 verse.

Like I give a phuck
Quack quack goes the phuckling
my sweet darling peers.



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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/14/2008
no worries--thise who like your writing, like it for wht it is!
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 5/14/2008
ooOOOUR HOT hmmmm, anyway One I know what you are talking about. You know I like 5-7-5 too, I think people should write what they feel,also understand about the reviews once read on the net that 5 reviews were the least people get on reviews. One has to try to find some way to get their feel good furries on, you know?

Times it hurts probably all of us when our work is not taken or accepted the way we want.
We'll find a way to make you laugh and or smile, hmmmm
somebody around here will...being that I am nosey wish I knew what someone said. Oh you will feel better after some prayers or a bunch of tickles hey or sip some wine or something.

Are you smilin' yet well leaving you some positivity and big blessings,

Reviewed by John Leko 5/13/2008
...5-7-5 is just fine here...and as said and other reviews...few words say much here...OnePoetGem...and your 5-7-5 is just fine here.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/13/2008
You know, sometimes we get to hung up in our own stuff.
You and your stuff deserve better. - Gene.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/13/2008
Whats goin on here sweet sweet man,I'M confused are u ok
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 5/13/2008
Well, I'm reviewing...'tho I'm not sure what to say about this "No Review Screw", OPG, unless you're trying to say you have the blues. Ya mean I gotta wait around for 8 years before I learn what's the "real deal around here"? C'mon...give me a clue, please :o)
Blessings and Be Happy! ~~ Micke

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