by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
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Effusive, or, used to be,
Ranting poetically, ranting self
Information of the sought.
Naught ends this acronym.
Erin is a land obtused,
Living through rhymes and chants,
Interred by others sight.
Zoology never truly met leprechauns.
Abyss/opens up, swallows
Baptisms might, presents
Eulogy of stifling
Tabloid frights of movement.
How, I wonder, now to
Live more? Die less? Do tears ‘Eureka’
Latent success underanchoring?
Yeah, that’s the ticket!
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/13/08
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|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Love you, my fellow Wisconsinite, Katie-me-self, always. Celebrate? Yes, with you... Now alone, together. :)
my dearest dear,
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|My dear desert dweller: When I read this I realized I had two choices: ensnare all of it in quotes, so as to tell you which parts blew me down the most, or, the harder choice, to choose from it all the following:
"...Interred by others sight."
And now that I have chosen, I'm left to actually use verbiage that addresses myself to them, as though I could make them clearer in order to praise them.
Here's what I'll do: invite you to climb into me brain and all me parts that react to the outside world and you can watch and listen to them making me smarter, closer, filled with wonder.
We, you and I, and the billions in AD, come here because it's where words can be celebrated. Well, Erin, me peach, I'm celebratin' love, katy xox
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Deeply thought provoking, Erin - one cannot just skim your words, they must dive in and be immersed to get the message - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Profound and so well written. Masterful. Liz|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Interesting and very profound piece incorporating the many emotions of the human spectrum....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Zoology never truly met leprechauns, but Erin did...and charms.
Love your last four lines.