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ADku
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, May 15, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Thought I owed everyone some happier art work after I tripped a little. This is in haiku but I call it ADku. |
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This is a nice place
if we do not show ugly
have a nice write all
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/15/2008 |
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don't tell me you tripped again...hope it is over a remote controle jeep and not a cheap trip....lol??
Well said!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/15/2008 |
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Great ADku, Gem; may have to try one soon. HeeHee...nice poetic teepee, this time :o)
Blessings ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/15/2008 |
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| i love it!! Yup, i do think we are on the same wave length here!! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/15/2008 |
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People need to respect others here; this place is getting too ugly at times!! Shame!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Don't ever give up writing!! We need you here!! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/15/2008 |
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| U been trippin', G, I'm tellin'...;) e |
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