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1st Story by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper Thursday, May 15, 2008 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Right here in Baltimore, son kills mother with bat, then tries to kill the father right where they live at.

First story morning fury, well I'm sorry can't believe the first hurry get it out of my face put something better in its place. Tell me something good it's better for my mood. Son kills mother with bat, right where they live at. Argueing over school grade had to be more for the price she paid. Father comes home he got some, but didn't succumb. There's got to be more, get the rest then knock on my door. OnepoetGem

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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	5/17/2008

This is when prayer/discipline needs to be reinstated, and morals be brought back! God help us!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)	5/16/2008

Sadly, bad news sells...what a nutty world.love ya, Holly




Reviewed by Paul Berube	5/16/2008

One, I think we've become weaker as a society. So much more permissible. Perhaps, in a round-about way we're all to blame. Human life seems to hold no more value than a video game. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/16/2008

A sad state we are in One!Our society has failed big time, an no one seems to know how to correct it. Like humpty dumpty... excellent write!




Reviewed by Elizabeth Price	5/15/2008

So sad, sad, sad. This happens everywhere. Doesn't seem to matter where you live. Excellent write. Liz




Reviewed by Tiana ~	5/15/2008

What a horrible heartbreaking tragedy! A couple of years ago a teenager burnt a home, killing his mother and aunt. The kid was high on meth ... So very sad and very well penned ... hugs




Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks	5/15/2008

WHAT is WITH these bats??? Man in Dallas just recently beat his ex-wife to death with a bat, just before she entered door to her workplace. Sad. Why don't these people just jump off a high bridge? Oh, this guy tried to do just that, but police talked him down. But, a child...to his Mother? Extra Sad. And you expressed your sadness well in this poem. Blessings ~~ Micke




Reviewed by Gene Williamson	5/15/2008

Having lived in Washington DC for 21 years, I've always liked Baltimore - but sadly horrors happen everywhere. You captured it well in your strong poem. - Gene.




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	5/15/2008

such heart breaking tragedy!well expressed but so sad--i wonder what more there is to this story as well--oh, i forgot earlier--hugs to you as well!