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Tanka: Night Whispers
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Sunday, May 18, 2008
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Origami thighs
unfold delicately in
the light of the moon ---
midnight finds secret lovers
on the Orient Express

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/18)


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Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/26/2008
I love it Karla as you can almost vision it as a peeping Tom as it gazes down on us. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/24/2008
Love on the Orient Express! Passion entwined with mystery. Delightful. Stay safe. JMW
Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk 5/20/2008
Short,powerful but yet such a profound expression of intimacy.
Reviewed by John Leko 5/20/2008
...wonderful creativity...finds much beauty...within your train of thought.
excellent Karla...
Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 5/20/2008
Taking a romantic trip!........M
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/19/2008
Steamy... only rated "G"?

Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 5/19/2008
Your Whispers, Radiate outloud! Damn this is good! :)
So few words, so much to mind!
Take a bow, girl!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/19/2008
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 5/18/2008
Karla this is amazing, keep these poems coming
God Bless
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 5/18/2008
Karla...this is absolutely gorgeous...sensual and passionate. I love it!
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 5/18/2008
The pictures that come to mind ... perhaps a bit "X" rated. Well done, Karla.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/18/2008
Beautifully serene piece, Karla; very nice! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 5/18/2008
Even the moon is smiling on this one Karla, Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/18/2008
Excellent. I hear the call of the train in the night. Whispering in the distance.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 5/18/2008
This is heavenly Karla, so beautiful, love Holly
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/18/2008

Romantically sublime.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 5/18/2008
Sensouous delight--as thighs unfold. And what a moon that is in the picture.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/18/2008
Awesome write. Liz
Reviewed by Charlie 5/18/2008
This is your best poem ever, Karla. Publishable. You need to sub it to some magazines... let me think on where... --Charlie
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 5/18/2008
Ahhh quite different combined with just the right amount of sensuality and mystique.


Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/18/2008
... I just don't BELIEVE this! I have been trying to post a pic to go with my today's post of the moon I shot last July... just like this one! It was massively oversized so I gave up. Wish I could also say it was shot from the Orient Express, but sadly not... just out my bedroom window here in Dorset! :)) This is totally delicious, Karla, and appeals greatly to the Agatha Christie in me. Hmmmmmm... origami thighs... Sorry... but you know I just can't resist... were they a couple of Yogi Bares, by any chance??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))))))))))))))) XXXXXXXXX "Tanks a lot Kate"... "no problem, Karla!" :)))))))
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/18/2008
Beautiful shot of the moon. I love this tanka, very nicely done.
Did you know that my secret desire is to ride the Orient Express? You have a beautiful day.
Peace, love, and light,

Happy Scorpio Full Moon!
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader) 5/18/2008
Origami thighs. I like that. Folding then unfolding. Quite an image. :)
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/18/2008
Sounds like you need a vacation on that Orient express...e
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/18/2008
Wonderful write, a bit mysterious...well done dear friend!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/18/2008
From whom are the fingers folding those thigs to an origamy swan?

Reviewed by Bonnie May 5/18/2008
Lovely thought, lovely write. You can't hide anywhere from that full moon can ya? Love ya, Bonnie
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