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INSIDE ALIVE, APART
by A PAX
Sunday, May 18, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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INSIDE ALIVE, APART

For years she lived inside herself
Disconnected from fleshy vessel
Comparmentalized behind blue eyes
Ignoring all, she'd wrestle

There beneath a surface life
Preserved and insulated
Stacked the years, without a tear
Her seperate self....created

Knock knock, who's there
Do you remember me
I'm sorry but we've never met
The mirror said to .....she

I once knew, a SOUL like you
A slice of sun in mist
Brightly shining through the storms
Until the lighting kissed

Zap, slap, a walking nap
A zombie with a heart
Trained to live with blinders
Inside alive.......apart

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5/18/08



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Reviewed by Jeff Mason 7/7/2008
I love the feeling this gives of a "wake-up call." And the wonderfully perplexing feel of 'internal conflict.' -- Jeff
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/19/2008
Wowie! Did you see behind my blue eyes?
Cryssa
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/19/2008
Very thought provoking ans worthy of being read and reread...


Fee
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/18/2008
A powerful and thought provoking write my friend, written with excellence and wonderful imagery that brings it to life!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/18/2008
Excellent use of language!
I love the way you develop this -
the image of the one that is trapped inside.

Axilea
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/18/2008
Electric words and imagery, poet!

Ron
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/18/2008
I once knew, a SOUL like you
A slice of sun in mist
Brightly shining through the storms
Until the lighting kissed

Zap, slap, a walking nap
A zombie with a heart
Trained to live with blinders
Inside alive.......apart

... Sheer brilliance and in your own inimitable style, Anita. A slice of sun in mist... totally delicious! TY Kate xx :))
Reviewed by Charlie 5/18/2008
Surreal... and provocative. --Charlie
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/18/2008
Love it. I've tried to live inside out. Ain't easy.
Gene.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/18/2008
This one is powerfully penned, Lady A, very well written!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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