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Distant Shore
by Vesna * Vanessa

Monday, May 19, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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How quickly it passed
as love grasped
our  hearts anew 
 The joy ..exquisite
in its pristine quilt
  ecstasy transmuting guilt
Though we parted
and to other horizons flew
I will remember our time
in this moment sublime
You and I tasted heaven
within our pulsating hearts
without warning you faded away
imploding in blazing parts
Could we not have stayed a moment longer
embraced in each others' thoughts
resting in one another's arms
in eternal cosmic courts
Cannot  we do this again
to hear you just once more
before you fly to that distant shore
do not leave me now with an empty hand
in a world cold and bland
Save a smile for me my One
and kiss eternal 
 I will find those lips
again..even if I venture through
planes infernal





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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 6/29/2008
Such intensity felt!
Love this LOVE Built into these lines!
The unity is wrapped up in 2 hearts! That are strong!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Gypsy Passion Lady Sheexoooo

STay Positive!
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/11/2008
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/23/2008
Very beautiful writing sweet lady...stay safe and well ...Hugss
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 5/23/2008
I see this as a love that left, but took your heart with him. I see you being truly devoted to him, and pining to see him again when you are both together in Heaven. Let us not forget the true love of our lives, and what we can achieve when we meet again in Heaven. Thank you for sharing, Vesna.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/21/2008
"Save a smile for me my One
and kiss eternal
I will find those lips
again..even if I venture through
planes infernal"

Powerful verse! So beautifully written and visually superb!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/20/2008
A beautiful love poem
Thanks for sharing
Peace & love Be with you

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/19/2008
All encompassing love share, continuing through eternity...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/19/2008
Such all embracing love should be infinite, and
the glorious images you paint stir the senses! ET
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/19/2008
Oh for the longing of love that was not meant to be. You have added a thought for me. I analyzed this poem and come to the conclusion that loves do not die, they just fade away but always the kisses are remembered most.
Reviewed by Morning Star 5/19/2008
Beautifully expressed thoughts

Save a smile for me my One

and kiss eternal

I will find those lips

again..even if I venture through

planes infernal

your chosen words captured a stunning vividness

Delicate words of true love!!!
Peace Love and Light..and hugesss...Morning star

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