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Just Getting Started
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, May 19, 2008
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HOT! Out there. Nearly 100 degrees.

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


The sun, white hot, burns
the blue from the sky,
until all is red
with fire.  Hurts to breathe.
Each inhalation
a scythe scraping lungs
dry ... as void as the
air, outside.  And it's
just getting started,
the heat of summer.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/19)

 



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Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Karla I can feel the heat as I look at this picture you share. Thank you.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Such a magnificent photo, it makes your words come alive with heated intensity!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by John Leko
...great images in this pen...make mercury climb.
well done Karla...
John
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Wheeeew, I could almost feel the heat but I truly did enjoy the nice images your describe in this writing.
Reviewed by William Bonilla
I can almost feel it from here
just reading your magical discriptive
Imagery, miss reading your wonderful work
Hope to catch up to some of it
Love & peace

William
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
It seems we now go from winter to summer very quickly, with little spring in between.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
we do love the weather--one way or another it gives us something to talk about! I love your opening description!
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
Vivid images ! Summers do tend to be hot, but there is alwys AC or a dip in the pool to cool one off........M
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Summer...my favorite season.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Just getting started...and hope that it continues after the freezing storms that castigate many people with winds, ice and cold rains, it's time for them to complaing about the heat and forget their freezing tushings.

Georg
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Yes, it surely was a scorcher today and there will be more "today's" yet to come......

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
I do so love the hot summers. Here is sometimes in the 90's. I can dress accordingly and stay cool. I do not like to lay out in the sun, not a sun worshipper like my daugher is. I cannot wait til summer but it is only May here and mostly cooler than usual right now for the season. Good write.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
We need underground houses for the summer!
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
What a great picture and write, your imagery is powerful and brings the write to life! I could almost feel the heat as I read the poem. Strange how the weather can be so different at the same time. It is cooler than usual here, I had to light the fireplace a few minutes ago...I never know how to dress! Enjoyed this my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Wait until the fire ants reach you! :)
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Great poem Karla,,, I can almost feel the heat,, though I do have my fireplace on to take the chill off,,, send some of that heat on up,,K?????
Reviewed by Cryssa C
I sure won't miss the humidity of the South this summer! Air conditioning is my best friend...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
ugh. The heat of summer is a real hazard for some. I'll make it but some won't. Your words ring true. Liz
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Texas must be the thief of my spring! We are averaging about twelve degrees below normal here. Stay safe. May peace be always with you. JMW
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Sounds like the weather we've been having, Ugh, the lake is looking better and better LOL
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Just got back from pet store, and 'tho it feels like 100 deg. out, it's only (HA!) 95 heavy deg. 15 mi. to your North. Your description in right on the mark, Karla...and I'm settin' up for my hibernation soon.
BTW, was down at Babe's yesterday, friends took me, and in a hurry to get home (after sittin' and eatin' for 2 hours :o) That's the BEST dad-gum fried chicken in the South! Or the whole of the U..S.ofA!!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
beautiful picture and poem... I don't envy you in that kind of heat.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Rene and I were out today and she wanted me to turn on the heater in the car as it felt like a late fall kinda day up this way...supposed to be mid-40s tonight...still not exactly summer yet here...Ed & rufuz
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You describe it so well Karla! We've had high nineties here for two weeks, with 2 days ovr 100, hopefully rest of week looks good in the eighties...hang in there;-)...ET
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Being here in Texas, I dread the start of the summertime heat! I'd much rather be in A L A S K A about now! LOL Excellent pen and pic; brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Your poem describes the prelude to summer and yes, it is definitely on the way.
Reviewed by Charlie
Well, For sure I know where my warm weather went!! --Charlie
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Beautiful Karla just like all the others. But this one was a lot calmer that those wild storms. Love it, love, Bonnie
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