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Naked in the Sand
by Rev. Dr. Deborah Simpson

Monday, May 19, 2008
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Naked in the Sand
 
We walked along lakeside today
Hand in hand, barefoot in sand
Unfortunately, I had to unfold
My hands to pick up a shell
It was so beautiful, dear
I wish you were there
 
We played a game of catch today
Kicking up the sand all along
Loping, giggling, splashing
But I fell down on my rear
Too much laughing, dear
I wish you were near
 
And then in the cove, made love
Just you and I as one my lover
Nature engulfed our bodies
In pure heavenly delight
Perfect rapture, dear
Oh how I yearned
 
We made a small fire in the pit
Just as the sun began to sleep
We sat there all cuddled up
And reveled in the beauty
It was marvelous, dear
I missed you terribly
 
We fell asleep on bed of sand
Warmed with gentle breeze
Morning then softly arose
Caressing us with day
A superb morn, dear
Naked, in the sand
Author Deborah Simpson
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Reviewed by Carvin Wallson 10/21/2009
Good imagery, and an interesting premise to write a poem from. Your control of the language is very good as well. I would like to know more.
Reviewed by Alan Busch 1/1/2009
A sensual fantasy of all that might have been ...

Alan Busch
Reviewed by Richard Orey 11/14/2008
"Naked in the Sand" almost says it all. But your verses add romance and sensuality.

And OMG, what a lovely way to awaken: Beside your lover, naked in the sand!

Very nicely done. I love it!
Richard
Reviewed by David Delaney 8/12/2008
Beautiful writing Deborah, enjoyed every word.
Dave.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/20/2008
Very simply romantic enduring write, and so glad it happened with the sand and ocean near. Beautifully written and appears to be in a style all your own.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 6/5/2008
Quite a revealing perusal into your thoughts and emotions. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Dark Knight 5/21/2008
whoaaa ok well this was beautiful and deeply enchanting
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/20/2008
Deborah,

Very beautiful imagery. Romantic and sensual. Peace, Love and Blessings, Paul.
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