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A Cascade of Dancing Waters
by E T Waldron
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
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My mind skipped over the stones

Watching  the  waterfall as the glint of  sun

Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds

And my mind became like a kalediscope

Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight

Which merged with the falls and followed

The wondrous water in  profusion and effusions

Of scintillation, played  magic with my emotions

As I lifted my mind to the power that pushed

The water into such cascading effulgence

I stood in awe of a  Creator whose imagination

Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation


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Reviewed by John Leko
...all the beauty of pen with water is lifed to something this excellent write.
beautiful Eileen...
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Beautiful writing friend~`*
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Mesmerizing!!! It's the only word that comes to mind to describe this incredible poem. As usual, you write to my heart. Thank you.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Morning Star
Eileen I love love this magical words
Seeing in facets that split into rays of sunlight

Which merged with the falls and followed

The wondrous water in profusion and effusions
Beautiful picture and visuals
Brilliant and inspiring!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss too...Morning Star
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Beautiful poem celebrating Meditation on Water - I often used to like meditating on the ocean waves coming in on a sunlit afternoon or evening and it works... BUT We of Earth are the Stewards of these precious water resources (not Creator) and having just come in from my Lake yesterday I can say we are not doing His Will on being the best stewards we could be right now. Shame, because despite those "Eternal Waters" we still need to protect the life giving physical water too!
Just a "tributary thought" from your poem...michael
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
I love your poem, I especially love "Made white caps shine like fractured diamonds, such a visually stimulating line.
Lovely poem my friend..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
This is beautiful! I love the cascading thoughts, yet the thoughts that lead back to the source of the waterfall...that Eternal source...of the Living Water...

Stunning! I think this is one of my absolute favorites of yours...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Dip your fingers there, because in every drop is a kiss from their Creator.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
mmmmm me too, invigoraging write here Eileen, good to read you again. Hugz Ch'erie
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
I stood in awe of a Creator whose imagination
Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation

I stand in awe nearly every day looking at His earthly creations; it's hard to even imagine what His heavenly ones must be like.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Beautiful poetry...these line,"I stood in awe of a Creator whose imagination Makes me yearn to see His heavenly creation," favorite.

And a beautiful creation it is, your song of words cascades along with it> Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
What a soothing vision you've created, Eileen! Even more beautiful than the picutre, your words are. I'll be visualizing this as I go to sleep tonight...
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Oh what a beautiful waterfall! Through the rippling water such beautiful creations are born through God's hands....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Beautiful writing, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
An outstanding write my friend, flowed beautifully, a cascading serene write, inspiring indeed!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Axilea MU
You used some very lovely words that fit the contest.
"scintillation", "fractured diamonds", "cascading effulgence"
create sparkling imagery.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
a heavenly creation it is! nature's bounty in all its captivating forms is a wonder to behold.
lovely piece of soul-inspired creation herein, eileen!
peace and blessings,
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Such peace to this,, just lovely Eileen!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
beautiful, visual write!
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
A beautiful discription, the mere mention on waterfalls cascading just relaxes my mind. I too yearn to see the heavenly masterpiece.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Wonderful and free flowing, a joy to read. I also look forward to heaven.
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Such a beautiful inspiring poem, Eileen ... I'm just soaking this one up ... hugs - T
Reviewed by George Carroll
If you think this is good he has so much more than we can imagine in store for us when we make it to heaven.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

All we have to do is look around at the Creator's gifts to us - His creations are majestic and wonderful to behold! I, too, love waterfalls - and His skies (unless they're filled with thunder and lightning - again, there is a terrible beauty to it, though) - His trees - flowers - sigggghhhhhh. This is a beautiful write. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Bonnie May
How beautiful and inspiring, terrific and imaginative write. Love, Bonnie
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