|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|True, true - We must FIRST ask the right MAN! (or for those who see God as Mother... gender doesn't matter... Most people go to the World first, that delivers the unreliable.
Good thoughts and good dreams...Later, michael
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|I agree with Victoria...and I will add that you have a spirit of gold. True wealth is within us and what we do with that wealth...sharing and giving it away.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|You have your very own pot of gold Lovely Bernice!
Within The Wealth of Your Heart of Gold :)
This write is bigger than the length of the actual poem
& thats very clever & creative poetess!!
Much Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Bernice, I have read many short ones, this, takes the cake and will be a keeper!
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...well written...wisdom and strength in your words.
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|very spiriual outlook on things, and perfectly correct.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Trust in Matthew for he was the wiser, well written...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, Bernice; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Matthew said it all. Great poem|
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|Bernice this is great. Man will fail you but God will always be there. Keep your head up...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|WOW, Bernice, this one is POWERFUL. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Thanks for the poetic faith Bernice, mine wasn't a dream, and I pray for forgiveness, but I accept my assignment as an earth man, we sure do have weakness, a weakness once tapped is that pot of gold, omg, hugs|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|A lot of wisdom within your short lines, Bernice. Excellent...and welcome back!|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Much depth and wisdom in those few lines...
Glad that you are back!
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Hey Bernice -- I was just questioning whether if total submission to God would equal a lonely life with more hardship. Thanks for your sweet poem reminding me of God's gifts. Well Done! Deborah|