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ADku Admission
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Truth is the light of the world, or the darkness, figure the math. 6-8-6 format ADku. |
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Never liked writing verse
still do not like writing my heart
private person I am
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/22/2008 |
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| i like this--interesting aren't we?? |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/22/2008 |
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When we write, we DO relinquish a part of us...one slice of words at a time...but that's how we poets are. Can't help but share a wee bit...as your ADku reveals :o) Yet, we gain so much, too...
Blessings, Friend! ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/22/2008 |
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Well, One, whether we like
it or not, when we write we re-
linquish privacy. Eh?
Gene |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
5/22/2008 |
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| Few words but does express your feelings...there's no problem in wanting to be a private person, most of us feel the same way. I thought this spoke volumes in a few words. |
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