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Sea Landing
by Axilea MU
Saturday, May 24, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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 I never liked blue

Except in the sky

And until I blended a drop of red

I questioned my colors

Because of their blindness

And thought I’d lose balance

… fall…

Instead, I opened

Yet another window, yet another

And I took off

(so surprised to see I could fly)

 

I visited, you see?

Ice cold Neptune

Hottest Venus

It seemed like an endless ride

Riding the tide

Of real feelings

More real than ever - ultimate

My propulsion subsystem

The simple pleasure

Cascading

 

Fuelled

My spacecraft led me

To a discovery

 

Home

 

Was a place inside

 

I knew it all the way

                                  - But what we know

                                  We can hide

                                    Like a sin -

Until I touched down

And saw the land of security

Felt it inside

Where it should be.

 

A perfect sea landing

 

No more anguish

On the shore.

 

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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
Love the landing!
Your heart is pure!
propulsion subsystem - Wow
The thoughts make me tingle!
Love this heartfelt write and written in purple (rich and sensual)
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

Stay Positive!
Reviewed by Cryssa C
A journey of discovery...self discovery... finding peace and the place to call home within our hearts.

This is exquisitely done...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Such a wonderful ride of new colors, new realizations, new birth as we learn to weather the storms and let peace reside. Each word you penned is a journey in itself. Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by Charlie
Get a load of all of these comments! I've missed AD. I love what manny moreno had to say-- love it... boy did that ever sink deep into my dry soil with its watery wisdom! And too, I thoroughly agree with David Hightower. I alway associate red with blood... purple with it too... the two chambers of the heart melding-- one full of oxygen, the other, yearning to gulp it... the two, melding to purple, that's the whole being (did I write this before?) Anyways, that's why I love purple... superficially, it's seen as being a fun, silly color, but below the surface, there is a depth deeper than... well, it's poetic...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Lovely and meaningful verses; thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I love the imagery and discovery in this gem! Thank you for sharing!...ET
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Beautifully written piece about finding your inner self.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
great poetic get together, it does feel good to finally figure the world out for self :)
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Quite a voyage of inner discovery you took us on here Axil and the finish as you always manage to do so wonderfully was well worth the long trip.
Fee
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Axilea,
I truly enjoyed this magnificient write
Love & Peace
Be with you
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Quite a journey to search for what you had inside. Brilliant. Liz
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Wonderful story of a trip taken to planets in this universe. And to come back to a perfect sea landing is quite a feat. It renews you in spirit, mind and body. Good write.
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
Very profound and beautifully written.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
The depth of this poem is equal to the depth of your soul. Lovely work, I really loved this line:

"Until I touched down
And saw the land of security
Felt it inside
Where it should be."

You are such a gifted poetess!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
Beautiful.
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
ahhh, the soul's unending journey...
nicely penned, axilea.much enjoyed.
peace & blessings,
carolyn
Reviewed by stan nassano
you arrived back safe and sound in a round about,approach landing all clear for next take off....nicely done,
stan
Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Riding this tide~of the raw subsystem .~. evol Ted
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Very nice, beautiful poem!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I really loved this poem, Axilea; it drew me in and didn't let go! Magical! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by John Flanagan
-But what we know
We can hide
Like a sin-
is for me the essence of it
and adds to the certainty of the expresssion and the theme.
Such a sure touch here
John
Reviewed by Art Sun
Really nice work Axilea...one can see you have delved into the very essence of your soul...there is where we find our landing, our safe haven....

Our true selves...

Nice, truly nice...

Art...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Absolutely stunning, Axilea, your best - BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by David Hightower
Axilea - Loved the imagery you used to express your spiritual journey. I keep thinking of the red as blood and life. - David
Reviewed by manny moreno
I was told years ago by an elder, a medicine man, that I should begin to gather my "medicine". I answered of course naively, " You mean roots and eagle feathers "? he scolded back "NO!" The medicine within you!.

Well years later I learned to understand. You see , the medicine to make me well was within me, I had to "gather it" to find my way and be a better , happy human being, no matter how dark the weather of life became, the medicine within me, would take care of me, make me secure......you Axilea, time to gather your medicine..A`Ho! My lovely angel friend. Be well Axilea. I love you.
Reviewed by Dark Knight
lovely poetry
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