|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Love the landing!
Your heart is pure!
propulsion subsystem - Wow
The thoughts make me tingle!
Love this heartfelt write and written in purple (rich and sensual)
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|A journey of discovery...self discovery... finding peace and the place to call home within our hearts.
This is exquisitely done...
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Such a wonderful ride of new colors, new realizations, new birth as we learn to weather the storms and let peace reside. Each word you penned is a journey in itself. Well Done! Deborah|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Get a load of all of these comments! I've missed AD. I love what manny moreno had to say-- love it... boy did that ever sink deep into my dry soil with its watery wisdom! And too, I thoroughly agree with David Hightower. I alway associate red with blood... purple with it too... the two chambers of the heart melding-- one full of oxygen, the other, yearning to gulp it... the two, melding to purple, that's the whole being (did I write this before?) Anyways, that's why I love purple... superficially, it's seen as being a fun, silly color, but below the surface, there is a depth deeper than... well, it's poetic...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Lovely and meaningful verses; thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love the imagery and discovery in this gem! Thank you for sharing!...ET|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Beautifully written piece about finding your inner self.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great poetic get together, it does feel good to finally figure the world out for self :)|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Quite a voyage of inner discovery you took us on here Axil and the finish as you always manage to do so wonderfully was well worth the long trip.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
I truly enjoyed this magnificient write
Love & Peace
Be with you
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Quite a journey to search for what you had inside. Brilliant. Liz|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Wonderful story of a trip taken to planets in this universe. And to come back to a perfect sea landing is quite a feat. It renews you in spirit, mind and body. Good write.|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Very profound and beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|The depth of this poem is equal to the depth of your soul. Lovely work, I really loved this line:
"Until I touched down
And saw the land of security
Felt it inside
Where it should be."
You are such a gifted poetess!
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|ahhh, the soul's unending journey...
nicely penned, axilea.much enjoyed.
peace & blessings,
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|you arrived back safe and sound in a round about,approach landing all clear for next take off....nicely done,
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Riding this tide~of the raw subsystem .~. evol Ted|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very nice, beautiful poem!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I really loved this poem, Axilea; it drew me in and didn't let go! Magical! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|-But what we know
We can hide
Like a sin-
is for me the essence of it
and adds to the certainty of the expresssion and the theme.
Such a sure touch here
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Really nice work Axilea...one can see you have delved into the very essence of your soul...there is where we find our landing, our safe haven....
Our true selves...
Nice, truly nice...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Absolutely stunning, Axilea, your best - BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Axilea - Loved the imagery you used to express your spiritual journey. I keep thinking of the red as blood and life. - David|
|Reviewed by manny moreno
|I was told years ago by an elder, a medicine man, that I should begin to gather my "medicine". I answered of course naively, " You mean roots and eagle feathers "? he scolded back "NO!" The medicine within you!.
Well years later I learned to understand. You see , the medicine to make me well was within me, I had to "gather it" to find my way and be a better , happy human being, no matter how dark the weather of life became, the medicine within me, would take care of me, make me secure......you Axilea, time to gather your medicine..A`Ho! My lovely angel friend. Be well Axilea. I love you.
|Reviewed by Dark Knight