|Reviewed by Michael Dainty
|Dry! I like it remind me never to get on the wrong side of you.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
You make me laugh.
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Witty Write Bernice! Ever so enjoyable this late night! Cheers, Deborah|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|clever and kind of funny...|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...when one speaks of open feelings...this will come to mind...as you did.
of course this is excellent Bernice...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are so cool!;-) Excellent, Bernice!...ET|
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|A good and amusing write.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|When one start to hear that it is time to switch to pants with elastic waistband...and shun the fly (?)
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|I love it...I can just picture the scene.|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|If those bags are packed, it must be for a good reason! Nice write.|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|You have a way of making me laugh.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I like this one as always your subtle humour blends with realism to create a great write.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Too much. I'm laughing. so subtle but so right on the mark. What a great parting shot. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|we bachelors (like me)are often caught with your flies down and there's no one to remind us - Worse, when you notice that while out shopping! So I'll take up (fly) fishing, that'll keep me out of the public eye...(bad pun). Someday I'll buy real estate on Lemonade St.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Way to go Bernice, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Cleverly concocted and expressed, Bernice. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|Very clever Bernice. Sort of a spin off of lipstick on the collar. BRAVO!
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Man I Just Love The Beautiful & Sarcastic Smarter than Him Flip Off Here-lol
it's like keeping balance & flying the bird at the same time to that guy-lol
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
|But why is the fly open? :) Hmmm. If it's called 'fly' for men, is it called 'flea' for women? :)|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Oh, my - what a parting shot! LOL Well done, Bernice -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.