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Your Fly is Open
by Bernice Angoh Lakota
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Excerpt from my book "Lemonade Street"


I’ve had my doubts
You’ve been acting aloof
You must really think I’m a fool
To let you walk all over me
My bags are all packed
Don’t wait up for me
And for your information,
Your fly is open.

(Did you forget to zip up your pants? You’ve been forgetful an awful lot lately.)






Copyright © 2007 by Bernice Angoh






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Reviewed by Michael Dainty
Dry! I like it remind me never to get on the wrong side of you.
Reviewed by Cryssa C
hee, hee...
You make me laugh.
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Witty Write Bernice! Ever so enjoyable this late night! Cheers, Deborah
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
clever and kind of funny...
Reviewed by John Leko
...when one speaks of open feelings...this will come to you did.
of course this is excellent Bernice...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You are so cool!;-) Excellent, Bernice!...ET
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
A good and amusing write.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
When one start to hear that it is time to switch to pants with elastic waistband...and shun the fly (?)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
I love it...I can just picture the scene.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
If those bags are packed, it must be for a good reason! Nice write.
Reviewed by Shedding Light
You have a way of making me laugh.

Harold M. Nash
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I like this one as always your subtle humour blends with realism to create a great write.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Too much. I'm laughing. so subtle but so right on the mark. What a great parting shot. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Michael Guy
we bachelors (like me)are often caught with your flies down and there's no one to remind us - Worse, when you notice that while out shopping! So I'll take up (fly) fishing, that'll keep me out of the public eye...(bad pun). Someday I'll buy real estate on Lemonade St.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Way to go Bernice, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Cleverly concocted and expressed, Bernice. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
Very clever Bernice. Sort of a spin off of lipstick on the collar. BRAVO!
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Man I Just Love The Beautiful & Sarcastic Smarter than Him Flip Off Here-lol
it's like keeping balance & flying the bird at the same time to that guy-lol
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
But why is the fly open? :) Hmmm. If it's called 'fly' for men, is it called 'flea' for women? :)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Oh, my - what a parting shot! LOL Well done, Bernice -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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