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Bouts of Anger
by Rose M Rideout
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
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What a night we went through last night so much anger outside our house making it really hard to rest through the bouts of anger.


Bouts of Anger

All through the night I could hear it,
The anger it had been so loud and clear,
As I gazed a little closer,
I could see this very strong tear.
Bang and another clash,
What’s going on outside my home,
I listened to the anguish bouts,
Knowing I was not alone.
 My husband jumped from the bed,
He said what’s going on out there,
I said I’m not sure but it’s angry,
It’s wild and savage I fear.
He opened the curtains, to our surprise,
The rain and the thunder had fought,
We were in the mist of bouts of anger,
And now the culprits were caught.
They must have seen us looking out,
As things soon quieted down,
The rain it had stopped and the thunder too,
As the tears washed over the ground.
All was well when we woke today,
The rain and thunder had both gone astray,
The bouts of anger heard through the night,
Had taken a turn to make all things right.

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Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 6/1/2008
Great images ! I could see what you wrote. Storms like that can bring uneasiness with them.....M
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/28/2008
A powerful write with powerful imagery...the weather has been something else this season, it seems as it has been raging across the nation! We've had some pretty furious storms ouselves, not as bad as the ones out west, but still rough! Well done enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/28/2008
Lovely perspective, Rose, and you have crafted this neatly and with great care. It has just the right balance of lightness and threat. Love the upbeat and optimistic ending. You reminded me of how I used to think when a little girl - I can vividly remember watching and thinking, just like you... that the storm elements went quiet when they knew I was looking! :)) Great stuff. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/28/2008
Wowwwwww,wonderful writing sweet lady,glad your OK...have a wonderful and safe day sweet Rose...Hugsssss
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 5/28/2008
Beautiful Morning Rose!!
And After Mother's Angry Bout of Fury perhaps she may grace your morning with some rainbows.
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/27/2008
wow--pretty darn angry!!!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/27/2008
Beautifully written from such a fresh perspective to create visions of artwork that would light up any heart. Storms lately are becoming very intense and not very sure why....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 5/27/2008
I think I've been through some "bouts of anger" before. An EF2 took care of my roof and now I have a new one and no internal damage. Yes, frightful they can be. I love the way you put this together about the anger. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/27/2008
Sunday night we were faced with anger as well,, 150 homes destroyed and and it took a life of a 2 year old boy,,,just breaks my heart,,this powerful force needs respect indeed.
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/27/2008
Excellant metaphoric like poem that captured just right the fiercness of a summer storm.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 5/27/2008
Rose, I have had some storms force me by their very "anger" to get up and look...you captured that well!
be well and happy, Kathy
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/27/2008
Same here. I jumped up and un plugged my modem.
Had the same anger last week too.
stay safe
Ron
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/27/2008
It is thundering as I write this here in New England, Mother Nature is trying to tell us something...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/27/2008
We are getting a wake up call from the Lord.
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/27/2008
What a way to describe mother earth's fury. I love it!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/27/2008
Very creative poem depicting the terrible weather that seems like it is out to destroy us! Your angry metaphor is perfect! When I watched the Iowa tornado devastation this morning I though hell is let loose!...ET
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/27/2008
Mother Nature seems to be extremely angry these days all over the world, and I truly believe She's trying to tell us something, but I also believe that most won't bother to listen.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 5/27/2008
Ah. Nothing like a good thunder and lightning storm. Well done Rose. Supposed to get some up in the mountains today. Hope so, I'm looking forward to it.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/27/2008
Sometimes that ones over there in the sky, can't let it go and start a mother of a brawl with fuses burning out and things going bang in the night...kind of the ones we do, so, what's the difference?

Georg
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/27/2008
As lightening streaks across the sky, and thunder roars, just think of it as the Angels up in heaven Bowling. That is what my cousin tells his little boy who is 8. I think it is so cute.
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 5/27/2008
Nature and its storms sure have had some rages lately across the world. You penned it descriptively like only you can. Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/27/2008
Have a little storm out there last night?? I hate storms; always have, always will, especially here in Texas; they can be so ferocious--and no freeekin' basements!! Go figure!! Excellent write, Rose; brava! Love the pic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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