|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|I very much enjoyed this write - beautiful word choices.|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|And you wrote it so well, I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the first stanza, you could have ended right there and written no further and it still would've been perfect.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I'm so happy YOU shared it/the depth of your heart!
I loveeeeeeeee this poem!
I feel this is all YOU! BE SAFE! and Enjoy your adventures!
Sorry I didn't see this earlier, but I am trying to get to all your poems I have missed lately!
P.S. There's a REASON for EVERYTHING... The WiTHOUT feelings! You have a plan that must be followed and alone to do it all, must be the ONLY way to really FOCUS on what needs to be done! and I sense YOU WILL! I can't wait...
I am a vessel without a voyage
A vehicle without a map
A Journey without a destination
An adventure without an end.
A lover without a love
A clam without a shell
A ying without it's yang
A light that needs a harbor.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
those are beautiful words captured!
This poem is totally outstanding!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very nice, I like it!!!!!!!!!! 'A lover without a love'....'A moment lost in time'----------BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE THIS SENTENCES!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader)
|Very beautiful thoughts.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Thanks for sharing this oustanding Spontaneuous write
Love & peace
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i really like the positive aspect of this rather than the negative it could have been|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Thank you for sharing this very heartfelt and beautiful piece with messages of hope throughout....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|A very inspiring write truly from the heart, well done my friend a great poem!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...and I hear your poems coming right from your heart,, well done Amber this is touching.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|They are beautiful thoughts. All my spontaneous poems disappear before I can run for the pen and paper. Nice job.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|You are that word that has not been written...yet.
|Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri
|WOW WE Amber you are very gifted great peom
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|For writing spontaneously you did a great job. I feel this back and forth and need for more in my life too. 'Like the freedom I now have though but decisions must be made for a happier life If I can find true happiness any more.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A splendid poem that to me is one of your best! It has a triumphant feel to it, Amber, that is uplifting! ET|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|So many things but most important a poet with a voice and we hear you loud and clear as you share your beautiful words with us. Thank you for sharing Amber.
Newfie Hugs, Rose