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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/22/2008 |
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| Wonderful write; enjoyed the creativity and unique approach as well as the subject. I can hear your words sung through a sad, raspy voiced country singer with a tender heart. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/21/2008 |
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| Heartbreaking, sad and romantic. This Dan, is absolutely beautiful, mkaes me wonna cry..... |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/21/2008 |
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Dan, I don't know much about country music (my nephew swears
by it), but I do know good writing when I read it. And this
is a beautifully written poem.
Aside: I also have written and had published a lot of haiku,
and it's an art form I enjoy - but sadly, I've gotten away
from it. Yours I like. - gene. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/15/2008 |
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A sad song that expresses a common theme in this world/life. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Kathryn Collins |
5/31/2008 |
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Hey Dan -
very country indeed. I couldn't make the picture appear, but it's fun imagining it. The twang carries on.
love,
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
5/29/2008 |
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| Dan - Like the play on words in the title and in the poem. Country, yes, but I can hear some blues there, too. - David |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/29/2008 |
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| Wow! This would surely be a hit,not only at the Rhyman,but everywhere,Dan!Hope you get it published! ET |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
5/28/2008 |
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Wonderful, lyrical poem my friend...it does have a country ring to it...I could almost see Tammy and George singing this one, or Conway and Loretta...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/28/2008 |
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| Great writing sweet man...please have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
5/28/2008 |
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Definitely a country flavor to this one.. I think you should tune it up and send it out myself...yep I do..)
Smiles,
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/28/2008 |
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| Definitely sounds like a country song to me! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/28/2008 |
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...and there are those that are much in love for the right one for the reasons but on the wrong time of a wrong house...
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/27/2008 |
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The toss of the dice or the flip of a coin, life can sometimes play cruel jokes, how sad....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/27/2008 |
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A shame sometimes how life works out, to love the right person at the wrong time HURTS. Thank you for sharing a great write Dan.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/27/2008 |
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| Penned so well to a Country rhythm, the eternal triangle. Great poem my friend. God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/27/2008 |
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Quite a dilemma this is..Sometimes there is no right or wrong...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/27/2008 |
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| Being a woman I cannot say too much. But this is a good write and your intentions are good so stay in the house where you are and just remember that good times. Embarrassing this write is kind of to me. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
5/27/2008 |
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The poetry of Nashville never changes. Your words flow as if they are being lived in the moment. Ain't it agonizing to live the agony of one living with one while loving another? An old one - with new words. - Bill
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
5/27/2008 |
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Agonizing, isn't it? Right when we think we're over things, something comes up that leaves a reminder of those lovely times together.
George |
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