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Ton of Bricks
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Tuesday, May 27, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A fictional poem expressing love in weight.


Wow this love has
hit me like a ton of bricks.
I need therapy
and no phony tricks.
I can't call on Zeus,
he was a God of abuse.
Love back then wasn't logical,
it was mostly mythological.
Here in the future I'm with,
I can't survive on myth.

Maybe I can take it up
with my love of desire,
the one setting my
heart and soul on fire.
I love her so,
all I can hope is
that she know.

Hello my sweet,
I'm guilty of
loving you complete.
You have knocked me
completely off my feet.
I've surely had to
take a firm sweet.
My legs are shaking,
but my hearts not breaking,
of this there is no mistaking.
The weight of a ton usually hurts,
however this weight only flirts.

 

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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/28/2008
enjoyed this--love can certainly be weighty!
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/27/2008
Love is the cement that holds those bricks together. Splendid write.
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 5/27/2008
What a sweetheart you are my friend! Enjoyed this much...truly from the heart!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 5/27/2008
How sweetly you write of love my dear.....the weight of lovebears no mass.
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