|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Subliminal personifications, precious to take time alone with nature.
that always seems to take the mind on peaceful journey's. Continued blessings and good health to you William.
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|How gorgeously you write my friend, this is simply beautiful poetry....what an image she burned in your mind and mine|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Thank God for memories,, when one's flame goes out,, we can still see the dancing in our minds..
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|William, this brings many images to my mind, and leaves me with a hand full of memory ashes. Loved it!|
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|And the passionate Flame you have successfully passed on to us, William. Your poem is insipiring and weaves endearing images in the mind!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
I love this, nature passion, two great combos..
I have missed you. Hope all is well,
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Ashes, this poem make think of love, passion, wantings...all converted into ashes by a moments flame of lust.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great conpassionate versing William, i guess it made it better than the one my wife flattened with her hands today, I told her she didn't have to do a harmless bug like she did :-)|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...beautiful write William...memories...images...all revolve around light in this piece.
very well written...
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|The moth will be at peace, will you still be after the night ends.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You see and realize more than others..
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I find the moth very symbolic of much in this write, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|William I love It
Memories live for ever within our thoughts
beautiful view of thoughts
Brilliant and unique write!!
Peace Love and Hugesss...Morning Star
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Now a memory that lives in your thoughts. Beautiful writing.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
BEAUTIFUL. What more can I say?
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing sweet man,have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugs|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This fine poem shows how great it is, that we have the ability to keep precious images...ET|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Time seems to creep up on all of us, my friend, even the tiny moth.|