|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|I love this. It is powerful in its simplicity and leaves the reader with hope in the face of despair.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A simple but beautiful write.
GOD has a plan for you!
Your writing is very inspiring.
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Do not be anxious. Waiting for what you can have is the best thing you can do without anxiety. It is sometimes hard, but the sea is forever there and does not end. It is a peaceful thing to me, so find peace in your sould too.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A powerful, expressive write to which I can relate, Kerry. I appreciate the analogy as well. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Excellent write - reminded of a sailor on the high seas, crying out "Enough!" - well done -
(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Tossed on the sea of life storms we all look and reach for the hope of calmer tomorrows. Vivid imagery. Well Done! Deborah|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...very well written...something we all reach for...and once found in darkness...hope...to hold on to.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I like the way you structured your poem, Kerry.
Down, down, down...hope is ever elusive. - Gene.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Kerry you did yourself proud with this write for as I read it I couldn't help as an old sailor to imagine real shipwreck survivors being tossed about in the ocean.