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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/5/2008 |
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I never really thought about it until your write but it is round and round and never stops. A great write, thank you for sharing Karen.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Debra Kraft |
6/4/2008 |
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something to talk about, and yet seemingly so little time for talking. Sometimes the turning just moves too fast, a roller-coaster merry-go-round...
Well said. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/3/2008 |
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| Round and Round, we all truly do go. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/3/2008 |
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| So very real!!!!!!!! NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/2/2008 |
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...great write Karen...this go round of words...which at Christmas finds Merry...and then a new go round...starts again. ...and what about gallop poles...they seem to go in circles also.
you got me going here Karen...
very well done...
John
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/2/2008 |
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| Boomerang Karen, and boomerang again, great piece of verse, :-) |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/2/2008 |
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| Karen, the cycles of life that we travel are over & over as though they're repeated in the same manner each year. I'm glad though that I have been blessed to repeat the cycles and to be with my wonderful husband and feel the love of my dear children, grand-children and great grand-children...those cycle is what we call "life," and I'm looking for eternal life in the hereafter. A great job on this one! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/2/2008 |
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| The circle of life no doubt,,, |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/2/2008 |
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| That's about it Karen, cycles and circles seasons and reasons,until one day HEAVEN,and all was worthwhile!;-)ET |
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| Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen |
6/2/2008 |
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| We are all in the cycle, the trick is managing to stick your head above it and have a look around. I think that you have discovered that trick! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/2/2008 |
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So very real. Life is like one big track that we continue to race around from birth till death. Some have a little more scenary that others though.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/2/2008 |
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| It all seems so predictable, doesn't it. Actually, life is best when it is predicable because there are less mishaps. Our daily activities and adventures are at the center of our orbital "round and round". |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/2/2008 |
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| Getting dizzy with the round and round here . . . LOL . . . That's it though . . . Trying to get through the day so we can wake up and start it all over again . . . |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/2/2008 |
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Yes, round and round...tis poetic ;)
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/2/2008 |
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| This is so strange...I was talking about this earlier today...only not as poetically as you have done here. Excellent, Karen. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
6/2/2008 |
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| You opened a new door for thought. Life is like going a round and round. We make little changes along the way, sometime we get the brass ring, others we don't. Great write Karen, Love, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/2/2008 |
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| And be sure to grab the brass ring as you go round and round. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/2/2008 |
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Beautifully expressed how life is
A merry go round
Love it all those wonderful holiday
except Xmas adds to the monthly
bills to get paid, month after month
Never ending battle
outstanding write love
This poetic view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and light....and hugesss too...Morning star |
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