|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is great, you brought a smile to my face
|Reviewed by Quanda Graves
|LOL!!!! Hey Bernice, you're funny!!! I've become a fan of you since Literate Nubian. I really enjoyed the read. :)LOL!!!
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Whatta bummmer...*him*, not the poem :o) Did he furnish his own compact mirror? You had us going all the way for a romantic ending...love this...
Blessings and Laughter ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|As we read to the end, we can laugh but if this were to really happen ...welllllll. Thank you for sharing Bernice, well done. lol.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|How delightfully funny! hee, hee, hee...
I guess it wouldn't be delightfully funny if it were true... I think you captured the narcissistic personality quite well... hee, hee...
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|LOL.....OMGawsh!! This was funny...Talk About A Man Full Of Himself! hee hee, and as for the girl, well I hope it's just that she is ego trippin or a bout of arrogance because a narcissistic personality can be a very serious disorder of the personality. They are totally complicated people, besides makin our skin crawl-lol
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|This one really made my day.
Harold Matthew Nash
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|How you made me smile at the end of this!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh my this is just adorable and it seems I know a few like your gentleman caller, sad but true....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an enjoyable read and an excellent write
With a twist, I wasn't comfused
just left at awe with this somewhat outstanding piece
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...guess the bride finds new meaning...in the word...plucked.
well written humor finds me smiling Bernice...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Love Nora Jones, but you had me going, ready for the confession of love everlasting with a ring, not some darned tweezers. lol. Excellent write. What a hilarious twist. Liz|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Got me, I was looking for a happy ending, funny you Bernice, but to answer your artwork, in a heartbeat! :-0 wow :-)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Clever you, Bernice, enjoyed! BRAVA, very well written!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Ya got me! Clever, clever you - well done, Bernice *clapping*
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You stinker!!! You really got me with this one, I was so thrilled for you having such a romantic proposal! What a gotcha moment! Well done Bernice!;-)(though i'm disappointed;-)ET|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Love it Bernice and what a great build up to the finish, though any man who would prefer doing a facial on himself rather than admiring your pretty face is a dumbass that you are better off without. LOL
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Giggle, giggle, giggle.............Great Read! Deborah:)|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|What's that...the other half? the better half? the only half?
He going on his knees? to be knighted? or to claim for mercy?
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|LOL better look for a real guy.|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Oh, this is lovely - funny in an uproarious way! Loved it! -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Whats wrong with that; I always ask my other half on my knees if my eyebrows need trimming or my ear hair needs it...after all that is what she is here for, isn't it...? ;) ed|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|You've got to read my "Chocolate Potatoes"... true story. I love this. --Charlie|