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The Marriage Proposal
by Bernice Angoh Lakota
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.....and then he popped the question

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She had been waiting for this night
all her life
She had dreamt it, rehearsed it  over and over
and finally that night where all magic is born
was finally here--
in a closed restaurant with private setting
Never had he gone above and beyond like this
The night air smelled of love
and wise butterflies made their way towards the candles--
 as if thinking here is a moment not to be missed
the wine reflected the shadows of the quiet moon
and somewhere in time back when she was only five
a little girl smiled, her dreams are about to come true
Nora Jones caresses the piano keys 
she must have written the song for this moment
for every word fell into place in the space between them
how could he have been so divine
to mess with her heart and bring her to utter bliss
she had found her true Romeo
and as he stared into her eyes, hers glistened with tears
she smiled, he seemed content
and then he got down on one knee
reached into his pocket
and popped the question
"Do you think my eyebrows need more trimming?"
and as she stared in confussion
he revealed the tweezers  and began to do his facial!

(Lol, I hope you all enjoyed this piece(it's fictional by the way), I'm trying to analyze someone who is narcissistic, how dreadful huh? The poor girl....My first piece of humor I suppose...hehehehehe)

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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This is great, you brought a smile to my face
God Bless
Reviewed by Quanda Graves
LOL!!!! Hey Bernice, you're funny!!! I've become a fan of you since Literate Nubian. I really enjoyed the read. :)LOL!!!

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Whatta bummmer...*him*, not the poem :o) Did he furnish his own compact mirror? You had us going all the way for a romantic this...
Blessings and Laughter ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
As we read to the end, we can laugh but if this were to really happen ...welllllll. Thank you for sharing Bernice, well done. lol.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Cryssa C
How delightfully funny! hee, hee, hee...
I guess it wouldn't be delightfully funny if it were true... I think you captured the narcissistic personality quite well... hee, hee...

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
LOL.....OMGawsh!! This was funny...Talk About A Man Full Of Himself! hee hee, and as for the girl, well I hope it's just that she is ego trippin or a bout of arrogance because a narcissistic personality can be a very serious disorder of the personality. They are totally complicated people, besides makin our skin crawl-lol
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Reviewed by Shedding Light
This one really made my day.

Harold Matthew Nash
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
How you made me smile at the end of this!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Oh my this is just adorable and it seems I know a few like your gentleman caller, sad but true....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by William Bonilla
an enjoyable read and an excellent write
With a twist, I wasn't comfused
just left at awe with this somewhat outstanding piece
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you

Reviewed by John Leko
...guess the bride finds new the word...plucked.
well written humor finds me smiling Bernice...
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Love Nora Jones, but you had me going, ready for the confession of love everlasting with a ring, not some darned tweezers. lol. Excellent write. What a hilarious twist. Liz
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Got me, I was looking for a happy ending, funny you Bernice, but to answer your artwork, in a heartbeat! :-0 wow :-)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Clever you, Bernice, enjoyed! BRAVA, very well written!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Ya got me! Clever, clever you - well done, Bernice *clapping*

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You stinker!!! You really got me with this one, I was so thrilled for you having such a romantic proposal! What a gotcha moment! Well done Bernice!;-)(though i'm disappointed;-)ET
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Love it Bernice and what a great build up to the finish, though any man who would prefer doing a facial on himself rather than admiring your pretty face is a dumbass that you are better off without. LOL
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Giggle, giggle, giggle.............Great Read! Deborah:)
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
What's that...the other half? the better half? the only half?
He going on his knees? to be knighted? or to claim for mercy?

Reviewed by George Carroll
LOL better look for a real guy.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Oh, this is lovely - funny in an uproarious way! Loved it! -- Jeff
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Whats wrong with that; I always ask my other half on my knees if my eyebrows need trimming or my ear hair needs it...after all that is what she is here for, isn't it...? ;) ed
Reviewed by Charlie
You've got to read my "Chocolate Potatoes"... true story. I love this. --Charlie
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