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Teardrops Lost
by Felix LeRoy Perry
Monday, June 02, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A musing thoughts...

Teardrops Lost

By: Fee

 

Heavy sodden heart

soaked in the rain

of painful tears

draped in a flag

of bitterness

just giving up

not worth regrets…

 

 



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Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill 6/14/2008
Wow, this one's deep. Hope it's just the muse talking!
Love it, though.
Hope all's good.
Love,
B~
Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo 6/4/2008
Nice one. Love the imagery. Think it's better to remove the last line from the poem. It is not needed and the poem works better when it ends with the line 'just giving up'.

-Lena
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/4/2008
Fee,
A very sad write. This one could mean something different to everyone, depending on their experiences. Wish you well. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 6/3/2008
He shall wipe away every tear from their eyes...........Deborah
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) 6/3/2008
Such a sad but strong poem you've penned, Fee ... be well sweetie ... hugs
Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner 6/3/2008
Sad and strong thoughts here.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/3/2008
So very sad, my friend.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/3/2008
Very nice, I like YOUR words!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/3/2008
Like a soldier just back from the war, at Arlington one rainy day in front of the grave of his buddy, one was spared the other not...and yes, everybody's giving up because it wasn't woth the regrets.
Fee, few words that will reach many. Believe me.
Thanks.

Georg
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/2/2008
How important it is to stay the course...even through heartbreak. Beautiful writng, Fee.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/2/2008
Sometimes when we are faced with realities it becomes difficult to bear, but we must persevere to get through, stay strong....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by jude forese 6/2/2008
a world of pain in a sullen heart, understanding it cannot change what is not reversible ... succinct yet powerful, Felix ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/2/2008
such sadness enveloped in your words--well expressed
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/2/2008
Regret....oh the power of this reality.
Such a little word that can not ever be described to the endless depths of it's potent path. But that is not always a bad thing now :)
Great Write!
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 6/2/2008
You couldn't have said more if you had used a thousand words. A fine terse verse, Fee! Chin up, friend!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 6/2/2008
A life without regrets is an unlived life. Heartbreak included. As Rose said, tomorrow will be better we all pray. But we will return to the regrets and sorrow another day. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/2/2008
Heartbreaking write, Fee; hope you are okay!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers to you), your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 6/2/2008
short and sweet and a little sad.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/2/2008
Fee,

So much lost my friend and not without regrets. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/2/2008
Disheartened words of dispair,,,excellent write Fee
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 6/2/2008
So much said so succinctly.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/2/2008
Oh sweet cousin, I know where this is coming from and today you may feel this but tomorrow the sun will shine. I know I have felt this way many times in the past and I am sure I will in the future.
Love ya face cuz XOXOXO. Rose
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink 6/2/2008
I can't see you giving up on anything. I have been away for awhile and am only back for 2 days and off again. I miss your words and have printed yours and others recent writes to keep my interest flowing. I will be back for longer in a few months. Till then, take care miss y'all. xoxoxo

Much love,
Sanja xo
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 6/2/2008
An ocean of sorrow in so few words. Beautiful.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 6/2/2008
Quite a sadness embedded herein; such deep feeling of loss. -- Jeff

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