|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|Wow, this one's deep. Hope it's just the muse talking!
Love it, though.
Hope all's good.
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|Nice one. Love the imagery. Think it's better to remove the last line from the poem. It is not needed and the poem works better when it ends with the line 'just giving up'.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
A very sad write. This one could mean something different to everyone, depending on their experiences. Wish you well. Love and Hugs~
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|He shall wipe away every tear from their eyes...........Deborah|
|Reviewed by Tiana ~
|Such a sad but strong poem you've penned, Fee ... be well sweetie ... hugs|
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Sad and strong thoughts here.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So very sad, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Very nice, I like YOUR words!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Like a soldier just back from the war, at Arlington one rainy day in front of the grave of his buddy, one was spared the other not...and yes, everybody's giving up because it wasn't woth the regrets.
Fee, few words that will reach many. Believe me.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|How important it is to stay the course...even through heartbreak. Beautiful writng, Fee.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Sometimes when we are faced with realities it becomes difficult to bear, but we must persevere to get through, stay strong....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a world of pain in a sullen heart, understanding it cannot change what is not reversible ... succinct yet powerful, Felix ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|such sadness enveloped in your words--well expressed|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Regret....oh the power of this reality.
Such a little word that can not ever be described to the endless depths of it's potent path. But that is not always a bad thing now :)
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|You couldn't have said more if you had used a thousand words. A fine terse verse, Fee! Chin up, friend!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|A life without regrets is an unlived life. Heartbreak included. As Rose said, tomorrow will be better we all pray. But we will return to the regrets and sorrow another day. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Heartbreaking write, Fee; hope you are okay!
(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers to you), your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|short and sweet and a little sad.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
So much lost my friend and not without regrets. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Disheartened words of dispair,,,excellent write Fee|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|So much said so succinctly.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Oh sweet cousin, I know where this is coming from and today you may feel this but tomorrow the sun will shine. I know I have felt this way many times in the past and I am sure I will in the future.
Love ya face cuz XOXOXO. Rose
|Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink
|I can't see you giving up on anything. I have been away for awhile and am only back for 2 days and off again. I miss your words and have printed yours and others recent writes to keep my interest flowing. I will be back for longer in a few months. Till then, take care miss y'all. xoxoxo
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
|An ocean of sorrow in so few words. Beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Quite a sadness embedded herein; such deep feeling of loss. -- Jeff|