|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A most compelling poetic moment ~
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Sometimes apoligies are greater with physical manifestations of realizing something went wrong, this was a great write, thank you for sharing
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A tear of sincerity
an apology from the heart
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Dawn this really hits the heart. Thank you for sharing. Sometimes it doesn't take too much to know one is truly sorry.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|You in such sweet brevity capture this emotion...splendid write.
|Reviewed by Carin Spirit
|It is truly wonderful to watch as personal growth unfolds. Carin'|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|OH but did he deserve it or was he just playing her? Actually ignore my cynicism, it is a great write. Short and to the point. Liz|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Dawn, always a joy to read your skillfully crafted poems.
Apology Accepted ... perfection in six lines. - Gene.
|Reviewed by Gloria Gay
|A story told through a brilliant economy of words. Well done!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You have a gift for the concise poem! Brilliant, Dawn!...ET|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Sad... that she smiled... unless it was through her own tears. :~) Although true forgiveness (receiving it) and apologies (giving and receiving them) almost always make me tear up too... sometimes while smiling and laughing a little. :~) Maybe it is the release of the weight of the world off my shoulders that makes me smile, I don't know...
Well, obviously you have done it again, Dawn... with just a few simple lines you have penned a deeply thought provoking story. Kudos!
Love your style...
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|This is lovely, what I get from it is that anyone can shed a tear but are they really sincere or are they trying to manipulate the other into believing they are...Great work!!!|
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|Great short poem, it has raw emotion and reality of a moment such as an apology.|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|this is so lovely...such tenderness~|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|A tear from the heart can mean so much more than words. Great Job Dawn!|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i like this--the sensisitity of a woman understanding the meaning of a single tear|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|A great message that promotes the mending of relationships.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So powerful, in so few words.|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|I like Jerry's comment--"an understatement". You leave unsaid words to light the imagination of the reader. Well done, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Understatement . . . That is your strength . . . A book is in the making with all of these gems . . .|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|So beautiful, Dawn; very well written! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|I like first 4 sentences, they are beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
No greater remorse has one to give but to shed a single tear and a smile in acceptance is the sincerity of forgiveness. I love your poetry. It's deep in soul and pure in heart. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|raw truth's ~ Ted|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|What greater form of apology is there than the sincerity of the soul and heart reflected throught tears...
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|How sweet and sensitive this writer must be.
To conceive these lines is deeply imaginative... and observant.
It is a pleasure to read this amazing short and deep poem.
Love and a happy June to ya' - Bill
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A very emotionally moment, filled with loving compassion and love, well said...
Be always safe,