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Apology Accepted
by Dawn Anderson
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One single tear

spilled

from the corner

of his eye.

 

She smiled

in acceptance of this –

his apology.

 

 



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Reviewed by Christine Tsen
A most compelling poetic moment ~
Best Wishes,
Christine
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Sometimes apoligies are greater with physical manifestations of realizing something went wrong, this was a great write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by William Bonilla
A tear of sincerity
an apology from the heart
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Dawn this really hits the heart. Thank you for sharing. Sometimes it doesn't take too much to know one is truly sorry.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
You in such sweet brevity capture this emotion...splendid write.

Allen
Reviewed by Carin Spirit
It is truly wonderful to watch as personal growth unfolds. Carin'
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
OH but did he deserve it or was he just playing her? Actually ignore my cynicism, it is a great write. Short and to the point. Liz
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Dawn, always a joy to read your skillfully crafted poems.
Apology Accepted ... perfection in six lines. - Gene.
Reviewed by Gloria Gay
A story told through a brilliant economy of words. Well done!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You have a gift for the concise poem! Brilliant, Dawn!...ET
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Sad... that she smiled... unless it was through her own tears. :~) Although true forgiveness (receiving it) and apologies (giving and receiving them) almost always make me tear up too... sometimes while smiling and laughing a little. :~) Maybe it is the release of the weight of the world off my shoulders that makes me smile, I don't know...
Well, obviously you have done it again, Dawn... with just a few simple lines you have penned a deeply thought provoking story. Kudos!

Cryssa :~)
Love your style...
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
This is lovely, what I get from it is that anyone can shed a tear but are they really sincere or are they trying to manipulate the other into believing they are...Great work!!!
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Great short poem, it has raw emotion and reality of a moment such as an apology.
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
this is so lovely...such tenderness~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
A tear from the heart can mean so much more than words. Great Job Dawn!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
i like this--the sensisitity of a woman understanding the meaning of a single tear
Reviewed by Shedding Light
A great message that promotes the mending of relationships.

Harold M. Nash
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
So powerful, in so few words.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
I like Jerry's comment--"an understatement". You leave unsaid words to light the imagination of the reader. Well done, Dawn.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Understatement . . . That is your strength . . . A book is in the making with all of these gems . . .
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
So beautiful, Dawn; very well written! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
I like first 4 sentences, they are beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Dawn,

No greater remorse has one to give but to shed a single tear and a smile in acceptance is the sincerity of forgiveness. I love your poetry. It's deep in soul and pure in heart. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Ted Bossis
raw truth's ~ Ted
Reviewed by Felix Perry
What greater form of apology is there than the sincerity of the soul and heart reflected throught tears...
hugs Fee
Reviewed by F William Broome
How sweet and sensitive this writer must be.
To conceive these lines is deeply imaginative... and observant.
It is a pleasure to read this amazing short and deep poem.
Love and a happy June to ya' - Bill
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
A very emotionally moment, filled with loving compassion and love, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen
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