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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
6/8/2008 |
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| very very touching....reminds me of my papa,he too has blue eyes....so well written...I'm glad my sky is always BLUE.,,WoW. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
6/4/2008 |
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Beautiufl write...a wonderful comparison! I'm glad that the sky is blue as well my friend! You're a beautiful poet my friend...write on!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Selene Skye |
6/4/2008 |
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This is beautiful!!!! I can relate completely. With father's day coming up, it's always difficult to those of us who no longer have our fathers, only their memories.
Hugs
Selene |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
6/4/2008 |
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I'm glad it's BLUE too Karla!
this is so sweet, and I bet your daddy is smiling down at you!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
Write On! SORRY! it's been awhile, but I'm tryin' real hard to play catch up, I miss the inspiration I get from you and so many others deep thinkers/writers~! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/4/2008 |
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| A heartfelt poem and a beautiful picture, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/4/2008 |
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A fine tribute and one that I am sure your Dad would have appreciated and understood all too well.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/4/2008 |
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| A beautiful blue sky. Always beyond the clouds, the hue is blue. God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/4/2008 |
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Karla,
I love how you use nature to demonstrate your father's qualities. Beautiful, yet sad poem~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
6/3/2008 |
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| This is good...always remember this and keep it in your heart. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/3/2008 |
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Sweet, reverent memories to fill your aching heart, God bless...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/3/2008 |
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| sad, and also so sweet |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
6/3/2008 |
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Sad, but what beautiful memories the blue sky will bring you!
{{{HUGS}}} Micke |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/3/2008 |
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| Blue eyes, the last thing I saw as watching my husband die. His were true blue too and very noticeable. I have gray green ones and not very pretty a color. The sky is so blue always except when it storms, and you Daddy is in your heart and will be forever. People will mention things and he will be brought right back to you. Oh, the memories we can still have to keep us going. Good and very good write. My favorite yet of yours about Daddy. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/3/2008 |
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| There's always a blue sky behind all the clouds. Well said Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/3/2008 |
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Yes I am glad to Dear Karla because I can assure you that your Daddy is happy,.Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/3/2008 |
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Sad and beautiful,and I can relate! He'd be proud of you!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/3/2008 |
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| I'm glad your sky it blue, too, Karla, and you're finding peaceful thoughts about your dad. Blessings. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/3/2008 |
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Karla he will be with you always, I know from experience grieving is a process that we need to live through...
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
6/3/2008 |
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| He is with you always, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/3/2008 |
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may all your coming days be the color of your daddy's eyes. Breathe Karla, it does get easier...promise!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/3/2008 |
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...beautiful write...sees all you color in the skies Karla...
John |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/3/2008 |
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| You won't soon forget those eyes, as he'll be with you always...ed |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/3/2008 |
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Blue... my favorite color... and the color of my Mama's eyes and Ahna'a and mine...
Crystal :~) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/3/2008 |
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I am sure that looking into your eyes it will be like looking into your father's.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
6/3/2008 |
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| --like the ogress's daddy... I'm glad your sky is blue too. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/3/2008 |
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Daddy is with us, always, and he will watch out over us from Heaven. So glad we had the daddy we did; so many other kids aren't nearly as blessed as we were; we were blessed to have our daddy for 77 years! Beautiful write; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/3/2008 |
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| How marvelous!!! This is so beautiful... |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
6/3/2008 |
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| He is truly with you in all you feel, see or think. You have so much to be grateful for Karla for that love will never die. Love, Bonnie |
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