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Daddy's Eyes
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tuesday, June 03, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I miss my Daddy. :(

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman

The sky reminds me of
my Daddy's eyes.  When he
is happy, it is blue.
When mad, he lowers the
boom with thunder and storm ---

I'm glad my sky is blue.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/3)


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Reviewed by neerja gandhi 6/8/2008
very very touching....reminds me of my papa,he too has blue well written...I'm glad my sky is always BLUE.,,WoW.
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 6/4/2008
Beautiufl write...a wonderful comparison! I'm glad that the sky is blue as well my friend! You're a beautiful poet my friend...write on!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Selene Skye 6/4/2008
This is beautiful!!!! I can relate completely. With father's day coming up, it's always difficult to those of us who no longer have our fathers, only their memories.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 6/4/2008
I'm glad it's BLUE too Karla!
this is so sweet, and I bet your daddy is smiling down at you!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSSion Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!
Write On! SORRY! it's been awhile, but I'm tryin' real hard to play catch up, I miss the inspiration I get from you and so many others deep thinkers/writers~!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/4/2008
A heartfelt poem and a beautiful picture, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/4/2008
A fine tribute and one that I am sure your Dad would have appreciated and understood all too well.
Reviewed by Jon Willey 6/4/2008
A beautiful blue sky. Always beyond the clouds, the hue is blue. God bless. JMW
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/4/2008
I love how you use nature to demonstrate your father's qualities. Beautiful, yet sad poem~
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 6/3/2008
This is good...always remember this and keep it in your heart.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/3/2008
Sweet, reverent memories to fill your aching heart, God bless...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/3/2008
sad, and also so sweet
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 6/3/2008
Sad, but what beautiful memories the blue sky will bring you!
{{{HUGS}}} Micke
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/3/2008
Blue eyes, the last thing I saw as watching my husband die. His were true blue too and very noticeable. I have gray green ones and not very pretty a color. The sky is so blue always except when it storms, and you Daddy is in your heart and will be forever. People will mention things and he will be brought right back to you. Oh, the memories we can still have to keep us going. Good and very good write. My favorite yet of yours about Daddy.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/3/2008
There's always a blue sky behind all the clouds. Well said Karla.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/3/2008
Yes I am glad to Dear Karla because I can assure you that your Daddy is happy,.Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/3/2008
Sad and beautiful,and I can relate! He'd be proud of you!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 6/3/2008
I'm glad your sky it blue, too, Karla, and you're finding peaceful thoughts about your dad. Blessings.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/3/2008
Karla he will be with you always, I know from experience grieving is a process that we need to live through...
God Bless
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/3/2008
He is with you always, Karla.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/3/2008
may all your coming days be the color of your daddy's eyes. Breathe Karla, it does get easier...promise!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by John Leko 6/3/2008
...beautiful write...sees all you color in the skies Karla...
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/3/2008
You won't soon forget those eyes, as he'll be with you always...ed
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/3/2008
Blue... my favorite color... and the color of my Mama's eyes and Ahna'a and mine...

Crystal :~)
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/3/2008
I am sure that looking into your eyes it will be like looking into your father's.

Reviewed by Charlie 6/3/2008
--like the ogress's daddy... I'm glad your sky is blue too. --Charlie
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/3/2008
Daddy is with us, always, and he will watch out over us from Heaven. So glad we had the daddy we did; so many other kids aren't nearly as blessed as we were; we were blessed to have our daddy for 77 years! Beautiful write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 6/3/2008
How marvelous!!! This is so beautiful...
Reviewed by Bonnie May 6/3/2008
He is truly with you in all you feel, see or think. You have so much to be grateful for Karla for that love will never die. Love, Bonnie

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