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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/14/2008 |
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Like being lost in a foggy mist
Love & Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/10/2008 |
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Deeply sad... the lengths some people will go to, to be believed...
and they think it is to protect themselves, when really they are losing SO much more and hurting themselves deeply by losing the trust of all of those around them...
You penned truth that cuts deeply with these words.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
6/7/2008 |
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This is so real. Some people would go on to tell lies until they convice themselves it is true, when everyone knows it's a lie.
I love this write! Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting on my work!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
6/7/2008 |
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All too true, the picture you paint.
And a wonderful pic you have with it.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/7/2008 |
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Picture and poem both amazing, thank you for your review on my poem "Little Gifts"
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
6/6/2008 |
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Man is born to save self and has a tendency from youth to lie. Truth is brought forth of genuine love for others and not the selfserving of self…beautifully written.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
6/6/2008 |
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This is really real about some people.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
6/6/2008 |
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| I feel healing going on. Excellent write. Thank you for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/6/2008 |
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| so well said--i know such folks--it is very sad |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/6/2008 |
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I believe a theif can only steal from you while a liar is capable of hanging you. In order to be a good liar one has to remember what they have said before as I have found people trap themselves between lost lies. Thank you for sharing Dawn.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/6/2008 |
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| A liar is a liar regardless of how you hear them and they'll repeatedly tell one after another. An interesting well worded writing. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/6/2008 |
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Vividly penned - excellent, Dawn.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/6/2008 |
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Realism at it's strongest. That is always the way with a lie...they seem to breed only more dishonesty.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/6/2008 |
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| Yes, I wrote something similar entitled "Image and Illusion" several months ago - we share the same idea. Beautiful photo. Nice writing. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/6/2008 |
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| Living a lie in six lines. And, Dawn, perfect lines at that. - Gene. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/6/2008 |
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| Lie on top of lie,, creates a pile that can no longer be hidden,, some just lie to themselves. so sad |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/6/2008 |
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| One lie usually does lead to another - quite profound. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/6/2008 |
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| Beatiful and poignant, a lie breeds more lies because you always have to back up the lie with something---which is also another lie.... |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/6/2008 |
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| This is such a true account of lots of people nowadays. I was taught that one's word is one's honor. Now people use and twist words until they forget what they've said--and certainly don't know who they are. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/6/2008 |
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| Lies beget lies, beget lies . . . |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
6/6/2008 |
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| evolving at a different pace all to common .~. evol Ted |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/6/2008 |
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gentle words that bite and bite well
John |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/6/2008 |
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Dawn,
Have seen this time and time again. One lie grows into so many more and what started out as small ends up hurting many people. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/6/2008 |
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| TRUTH, SAD AND VERY NICE!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/6/2008 |
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...this wonderful piece of poetry...is full of truth.
great write here Dawn...
John |
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