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Day In, Night Out
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, June 06, 2008
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... enough, Lord. ...

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman *will have to upload later*

... repetition in the Plains
and Midwest:
round after round of severe
weather. Know
they're weary of hiding, of
worrying
if this will be IT, the One ---
enough, Lord.
Houses and towns gone in a
madswirl of
Nature's fury; chasers try
to warn. We
under the sky look up and
pray it does
not lower in a scream of
wind. Day in,
the dread of more storms wears us
down; night out,
lost sleep. Let the pattern change.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/6)

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Reviewed by Cryssa C	6/9/2008

What crazy weather we are having this year!! Wearing and Wearying, isn't it!! Here, in Montana, we have had rain every day for three weeks...Ten days it was just steady rain, and now it is just thunderstorms... I thought maybe I had somehow been transplanted in Seattle! Hope the weather patterns change for the better for you... Cryssa




Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson	6/8/2008

I pray the patterns will change. Weather every where seems to be getting more unprdictable.. Sometimes I wonder >>>>....M




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	6/7/2008

I hope you and Karen are okay. God will protect you both. ((((( Love and Hugs ))))) Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath	6/7/2008

Karla, the poeming seems prayerful. Bidding you peaceful and wholeness within your heart. Take the best of care, ~Gwendolyn




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	6/7/2008

I fear this pattern will only worsen as the days move on. Something truly amiss with Mother Nature these sad days.




Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri	6/7/2008

Storn Spinner you bring a different world to me thanks Yuchy




Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)	6/7/2008

Powerful and deeply meaningful




Reviewed by Dawn Anderson	6/6/2008

Prayers sent your way Karla.




Reviewed by William Bonilla	6/6/2008

My friend Karla You need to become the "Florida storm spinner" where we get our share but not as much.......lol Love & Peace




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	6/6/2008

Powerful Karla, very powerful God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson	6/6/2008

I pray it does Karla...I pray it does. God Bless Allen




Reviewed by Joyce Bowling	6/6/2008

I hope you get the change my friend...your write is a true cry from the heart, very touching... Blessings, Joyce B.




Reviewed by Gene Williamson	6/6/2008

Karla, you write this plea for sanity in the weather you're experiencing out there with passion and poetic beauty. I hope it works to change the pattern. - Gene.




Reviewed by Jon Willey	6/6/2008

This calamity is not with normal resolution. Be safe, God bless. JMW




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	6/6/2008

A pattern change would be nice,,, as here in MN,, many houses have been destroyed,, tossing a 4 year old to death,,, with a sister in critical condition,,,,so sad for this family that attend my church.




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	6/6/2008

Maybe moving back to Ohio would be the answer to wearing you out and losing sleep...keep up your prayers...ed




Reviewed by John Leko	6/6/2008

...seriousness to be found...in the beauty of your write. well done Karla... John




Reviewed by Amber Moonstone	6/6/2008

Yes, Mother Nature is surely mad at us lately. I am in Virginia, and we have had three storms in the evening hours that could light up NYC!! Peace, love, andlight, Amber "V"




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	6/6/2008

I hear ya. We need a break; the ones in the Upper Plains need a break! Very well penned; brava, Karla! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis	6/6/2008

Very beautifully written, Karla.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	6/6/2008

Excellant write Karla and such strong lines...love it. hugs Fee




Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper	6/6/2008

Dear Karla, I truly understand your concern/fear. We've seen the devastation of storms on news channels so frequently one just never knows when they'll be next. All we can do is pray and be as prepared as we know how to be--non-perishable food, gas in the car, valuables ready for travel, etc. Prayers and blessings.




Reviewed by Georg Mateos	6/6/2008

Wait until you see the long haire dude with the sign saying "THE END IS NITE" and after a sleepless night, comes morning and you are alive but tired like a donkey carrying stones uphill. Dear Karla, don't let any storm scare you after all you have been through and laugh in the face of every adversity. Georg




Reviewed by Bernice Angoh	6/6/2008

Sorry to hear about the storms down there, must be a drain to live in a place like that....

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