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Trying to get out of this depression I've been feeling since Daddy died.

This literally popped into my head - can't help it - gotta squeeze - gotta - sometimes squeeze a bit too hard.

Dang. Killed another one. LOL

... I can't wait to get it in my hands.
I want to squeeze and squeeze and
s q u e e z e until its eyes bug out and
its breath leaves in a solitary satisfying
P  O  P -------------------------- bubble wrap

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/7)




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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Through your writing you find release of the deep hurt, one letter at a time....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
I feel you girl, you go right ahead and pop those eyes out, gotta let it out somehow!lol
Reviewed by Cryssa C
ha, ha, haa.....
Karla, your creativity astounds me!
Pop away!!
Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri
Karla it hurt bigtime and writing helps it helps so keep writing. your Dady is with you in spirit and ill guid you in your writing
In Sympathy
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
not a bad way to get rid of some frustration!
Reviewed by Paul Berube
cute Karla.
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Tension released at the expense of another packaging bubble! You are quite the clever one Karla. May peace find and embrace you. JMW
Reviewed by Felix Perry
They should pack bubble wrap as stress relief and perhaps market it as such.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Then you will enjoy this...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Karla don't make me go there and spank your tushy into reason.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
This brought a smile to my face, Karla! I just love that
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
Sweetie, maybe it will to not look at Daddy as having been taken out of your life. See him as going on ahead to prepare the way for you, as he has always done.

Bubble wrap :-) Yeah Buddy ... they MADE that stuff for me! Pop pop pop ...

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Great write here Karla I am here for you
God Bless
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Whatever works for you sweetie ... Hang in there babydoll ... hugs - T
Reviewed by John Leko
...excellent, excellent write Karla... and P O a different way...pop...addressing your father.
great work...
Reviewed by Axilea MU
A universal activity! ;-) And a good metaphor too.

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
I sometimes enjoy this too, Karla, but without the emotion. :) Try jumping on them. That's fun too. How about popping balloons? Better be careful though. You might graduate into slashing tires. :))
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat

An odd way to try and rid yourself of the pain. Whatever works!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
as they say whatever does it for ya;-) seriously I know the pain,you remind me of when I lost my father, wjom I dearly loved and he was also a best friend to me...Rough going, but it soes lessen with time

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
I'm with you, Karla. I never saw a bubble wrap
I could - pop - resist. - Gene.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Well, the title reminded me of my book, Violent Visions of Murder, but when I read the poem I realized your murderous need was quite innocent. Cute and humorous.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Great way to relieve sadness or stress, Karla! ADORable write; enjoyed~ BRAVA, very well written with a sense of humor!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Actually, very good therapy - keep squeezin, and poppin.
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Cute Karla, did not know or imagine where it was going. Great suspense. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
I love this! Your title captivated me and reeled me in like trout! Held me captive from the first word to the last! Enjoyed!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hahaha!!!!! LOL!!!!! They're addictive, aren't they? I like to pop them too whenever I get my hands on them.

Sandie Angel :o)
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