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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/14/2008 |
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Well Penned Dawn
I always say
Ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
6/14/2008 |
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Succinct wisdom with a pinch of Frederick Perls Gestalt Therapy, living in the here and now...Jungian slant and the Philosopher's Stone, For the Moment transforms simplicity...be well always, Dawn.
Warmly,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/13/2008 |
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Very well written dawn, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/13/2008 |
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Wonderful parable that in itself answers a lot of questions. Well done Dawn
hugs
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/13/2008 |
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Wow this is so true we learn more
By quietly listening!
Beautifully expressed thoughts
Outstanding words of wisdom!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/13/2008 |
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Dawn,
Sometimes one learns more by keeping the mouth closed and the ears open. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/12/2008 |
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...at this moment...much here has been so wonderfully said...in fine poetry.
no questions Dawn...this is excellent.
John
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/12/2008 |
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Very wise advice and words to take heed....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
6/12/2008 |
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The orphanage director in Haiti used to call me "Queen Question"...
I guess that says I have failed this test.
But, I see great wisdom in your words, and I am trying to stop expecting all the answers.... NOW!
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
6/12/2008 |
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I really like what " FOR the Moment " does for the imagination.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/12/2008 |
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Hi Dawn,I enjoy reading your poem very much.Yesterday is the past and tomorrow is always uncertain,but always live in the present and now.Appreciate today because today is all that we have in front of us.
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/12/2008 |
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We will never see tomorrow, yesterday is gone, we have only today.
Love reading your poems Dawn!!!!!
:)Christine |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/12/2008 |
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Gene said what I wanted to! You have a gift for clarity Dawn!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/12/2008 |
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Dawn, I love the way you pack so much wisdom
into a few well written lines. Living one day
at a time...gene. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/12/2008 |
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| Yes! Very powerful lesson... |
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| Reviewed by J AG |
6/12/2008 |
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| This is profound in its simplicity and content. Something I truly would put on my mirror to read every morning, to remind myself of what is important. You immortalize a secret to living life in peace. Thank you! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/12/2008 |
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Wonderful write, Dawn; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/12/2008 |
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| 'It was in this way that he came to understand the value of living in the present'--------VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/12/2008 |
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Sublime, Dawn - indeed! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/12/2008 |
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| there is much insight here-well written! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/12/2008 |
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Dawn
you've just described my brother in a few lines.
Well done!
John |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/12/2008 |
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| A very insightful poem that offers a great message "to be learned". Taking life a moment at a time offers far more interesting things to do than peeking behind doors of the mind to see what is or might possibly be there. P.S. thanks for visiting my site and adding the photo. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/12/2008 |
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| Without our past to guide us and help us make judgment, and our future which hold our desires and dreams, the present is an empty shell . . . |
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