|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Reviewed by Cherise Carroll
|What is the point indeed! Half the fun is in the mess we make! Love is a treat that should be enjoyed with the understanding that it is sweet, but it can get sticky..."and live and bruise and melt" a subliminal message of loving oneself enough to try love again? Wonderful poem Michelle!|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...wonderful write of the heart Michelle...
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|There is always risk involved where the heart is concerned. A powerful poem! Hugs~
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Made me think of the old song, "You always hurt the one you love"
For one reason or another, love includes pain. Love is not possession, but selflessness, or unselfishness, as you have written.
The open, scarred hands, whether you intended it or not, speak of the greatest love--the love of Jesus Christ as He bore the sins of those He loved.
Yes, love. Wonderful writing!
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Awesome write Michele!|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|A loving and lovely poem, Michelle. Love is its own feedback. - gene|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Much thought provoking words here Michelle. I came to the epiphany yesterday that the fear of love is what keeps us from loving. I was faced with that fear and after reading your poem, I feel very clear about my fear...wow,
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Another excellent write Michelle. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant Michelle!
Love it!! Yes, love... we love, and melt and bruise for it!
Love, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|If only the entire world would read these lines and allow it to penetrate, we just might have a much better world, well said...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Absolutely beautiful, meaningful, thougth provoking lines, Michelle, exquisitely penned and felt! Well done -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|"otherwise what's the point, we just live in fear of love"
These words and the whole poem have given me substance for reflection, Michelle. You have powerfully emphasized what love can be. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes,
Regis (Reg) xo