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Have you ever wondered?
by Makhtal Ali
Sunday, June 15, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel like a stranger?
Like a fish out of water
Like a teardropp in a loud laughter
Like love in a heart of a hater!

Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel lost?
Like a dropp in the ocean
Like a needle in a haystack
Lost... that you don't know white from black!
Like walking straight in a destination
When you know there is no way to go back!

Have you ever wondered how is it like to feel so confused?
That you don't know
when you're treated nicely
And when you are abused!
Have you ever felt so much low?
And you don't know what to do or where to go?
When you see all the doors around you are locked and closed!

Have you ever wondered how is it like to be in a non-stop stress?
When you never feel so sure about something you always have to guess!
when you feel like crying out loud
And spit that burden of these hard feelings inside you
However, these feelings you have to keep & suppress
Although, you are in the greatest need for a gentle caress!

Had anyone felt so much pain like this before?
'Cause that's what I really feel... maybe even more!

I don't wanna feel like a stranger
I don't wanna feel lost
I don't wanna feel confused
I don't wanna be in a non-stop stress
I just want to stop this dreadful feeling of loneliness! !



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Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/19/2008
An honest cry from the heart.
John
Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 6/16/2008
I think we have all felt this at one time or another, but for some it is everyday. Good write.
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 6/15/2008
Well done, Makhtal. Should there be a reality attached to this poem
and the poet, it is my hope that association with the Den will help
ease that "dreadful feeling of loneliness." - gene.
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