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Young and Free
by Felix LeRoy Perry
Sunday, June 15, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Ahhh when we are young time seems like an eternity...and so does love.


Young And Free

By: Fee

 

Along the train tracks where we walked

Beneath sunset skies turning crimson red

We’d stop for a while in Moody’s Field

Guiding her to our sweet clover-leaf bed

 

I’d gently caress her skin so silky soft

Run my fingers through her auburn hair

Beneath the stars we’d plan our future

I thought I’d always have her near

 

Juicy Fruit gum kisses under stars

Passion tingling ignited by moonbeams

Confession grade feelings easily aroused

Young lovers made their lasting dreams

 

Wrinkled clothes and knowing looks

Trembling virgin touch incubating desire

Goodnight kisses on front porch stoops

Walking home alone a smouldering fire

 

 



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Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 6/28/2008
Nothing like young love's sweet anticipation. You penned it expertly! Well Done! Deborah
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/17/2008
I love this, Fee. You've captured those days of holding hands with anticipation. Great imagery, too! Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 6/17/2008
OH the angst of being young and not having what you need close at hand to take the situation more firmly in hand. Yearning, teasing, tensing. Excellent passion. Liz
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/17/2008
Oh Golly Gee... I Wished I Was Allowed To Date.....
Love This Poem Fee, as usual Master Poet! :)
Tender Years & Newly Discovering Young Love
Very Lovely Poem
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Morning Star 6/16/2008
Juicy Fruit gum kisses ahh I remember those where
Good old days of our youth
This are some beautiful sweet memories
A beautiful sweet write!!
Peace Love and Hugesss.....Morning star
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/16/2008
Moody's Field and those Juicy Fruit Gum kisses... totally unbeatable in terms of easily aroused and unquenchable fires... whatever happened to them??!! Reckon it must have been you, Darlin, setting my hay barn on fire when I was 10... but my oh my, the blaze was so pretty - at least, I thought so! :)) LOVE this, as you can imagine. Kountry Kate xx
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 6/16/2008
Passionate and so romantic, yes, young love is butterscotch sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill 6/16/2008
"Juicy fruit kisses." That one made me smile!
Love,
Becca~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 6/16/2008
Fee you brought this scene and all its emotions alive to your readers. Wonderful work.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/16/2008
Aah, when we were young...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/16/2008
Wonderful write, Fee; bravo! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/16/2008
Fee,

Ah Yes. I remember needing many a cold shower. Those Juicy Fruit Kisses were the best. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/16/2008
A bunch of thanks Fee, for dragging me back to better days and better memories from this rotten everyday's calamities.
A romantic like you can be the one forbidden tomorrow.

Georg
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/16/2008
Beautiful memories of the way things were. Thank you for sharing your great words with us.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
Reviewed by Ted Glines MSW 6/15/2008
Ah, those brief eternities, Fee. Loves that would never die. Grandparents who were forever. School would never end. Life was an eternal today. Now we look back and see those so-brief moments. I really like this one, Fee :-)

Ted
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/15/2008
Beautiful sweet writing of a time that will always live in the heart and memory.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 6/15/2008
Ah yes Clover....Amazing plant that stuff..has a strange effect on humans... devastating on cows though LOL...
Brought a smile to this face today, ty Fee, Hugzz Cherrypie
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 6/15/2008
Thanks, Fee, for reminding us that we were once that
young and free. - gene.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/15/2008
so very sweet!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/15/2008
BEAUTIFUL, Fee, absolutely beautiful! Captured perfectly!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/15/2008
This poem makes me want to be young and in love once again. Lovely imagery!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman 6/15/2008
super last line - it's 3am Fee, just got home - 'juicy fruit kisses'! lol - thanks for the read xx
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/15/2008
Very nice, Fee, I can relate to those youthful days of tender nights and fires burning till you wanted to burst at the seams...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 6/15/2008
I'm sorry I've been away to miss your exciting poems Fee. This uis one of the best you've written and I think others will identify with "Incubating desires". Wow again! love,
Susan
Reviewed by jude forese 6/15/2008
succulent and engulfing ...
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